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Crossroads of Life

Oh look who toils up yonder hill Of shoulders stooped and slow of gait Garments hang off a frame once filled The body drips with yesterday’s fate An existence once filled with hate and greed Ensnared in a mind of ego sense Attachments and illusions that once took seed In man’s entrapment - in a fog so dense Look how he persists to reach the roads Crawling now in dust and sweat Unshackling life’s chains as he goes His saving grace - his terrestrial death Facing his crossroads - flawed Ego he must lose A formidable tempt in earthly men Freeing mental obscuration he must choose A transcendental state to reach his Zen Oh look who runs down yonder hill A liberated awakening for all to see Freed from dark paths he once did travel Oh aligned Soul - you are now set free
Footnote - The precepts of the peaceful Dalai Lama, is that Buddhism is not a religion but a way of life. This is an explanation of Tibetan Buddhism, enlightenment and spiritual rebirth. Buddhahood is defined as a state free of the obstructions to liberation as well as those to omniscience. When one is freed from all mental obscuration, one is said to attain a state of continuous bliss mixed with a simultaneous cognition of emptiness, the true nature of reality. In this state, all limitations on one's ability to help other living beings are removed.

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Date: 11/28/2019 12:30:00 AM
Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it. Catchy words blend together to get a very satisfying read. A spiritual journey well penned
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Date: 7/26/2017 6:00:00 AM
I loved the way you brought the words together, dear. The poem is a delight. I learned more about Tibetan Buddhism thanks to your footnote.
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Date: 7/27/2017 2:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Eileen, both for your visit and lovely comment. I don't get a lot of time these days to leave comments, but I do always read all you poets beautiful poems. You in particular are your own woman Eileen. I really admire that...Maria
Date: 7/20/2017 5:47:00 PM
Ego I find is generally in the eyes of the beholder. A state of self gratification or over indulgence in delusion
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Date: 7/21/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Christopher for your visit...Maria
Date: 7/19/2017 1:28:00 PM
You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
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Date: 7/21/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Funom for your visit and comment...Maria
Date: 7/16/2017 10:47:00 AM
To each one, one own perspective...origin, upbringing, geographical region etc. But your poem brings the fact that spiritual upliftment is not confined to such boundaries. It is free to explore and discover. Nobody on this earth knows the final line....Your poem is one so inspiring and wonderfully composed dear friend. :)
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Date: 7/17/2017 2:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Sunita, you understand completely. I thank you for visit and excellent comment my dear friend...Maria
Date: 7/15/2017 8:27:00 PM
I really liked the last line, free at last. There has been no greater teacher on earth than Jesus. What a wonderful world if all followed His teachings on the golden rule, etc. He is the Way, the Truth and the Life, and He sets us free when we trust and follow Him.
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Date: 7/16/2017 1:03:00 AM
I have the greatest respect for the teachings of Jesus Christ Vivian, being a Catholic myself. Buddhism is a way of Life, not a religion. I have every respect for all the great teachers, Jesus, Gandhi, the Dalai Lama etc. Thanks so much for the lovely comment and visit...Maria
Date: 7/15/2017 6:09:00 PM
Uplifting, liberating, a poem that to me highlights spiritual frailties. A sense of natural order, not unlike your synchronised layout. A Beautiful piece with an excellent closing, kind regards, Kevin x
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Date: 7/16/2017 1:06:00 AM
I am so glad that you saw it in the Spiritual Light that it was written in Kevin. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and visit...Maria
Date: 7/13/2017 9:29:00 PM
Humility and kindness are the keys. And, though I know little about Buddhism I know that Jesus was humble and kind and I'm sure Budda must have been also. Enlightenment can come through many sources to many different peoples though and I just praise God for spiritual peace and pray for world peace somehow, someday.
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Date: 7/13/2017 1:23:00 PM
I tend to go with the thought that my religion is knowledge. Knowledge brings me fulfillment. Wonderful poem, Maria.
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:22:00 PM
Very spiritually enlightening poem, Maria. Expressed beautifully. You are such a talented poetess. Elegant poetry. Love always.
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Date: 7/11/2017 9:51:00 PM
Coming from one of the best poets on this site, I'll take that as a huge compliment Freddie. ..Maria hugs to you too :)
Date: 7/11/2017 7:47:00 AM
Sometimes we are shackled by our own mentality, but through spiritual awakening we are set free...Well written Maria
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Date: 7/11/2017 8:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Joseph. Meditation will always be part of my life. In this day and age it is a very necessary thing to do to declutter the clutter .Thanks for the visit and the astute comment...Maria
Date: 7/11/2017 7:39:00 AM
I like this poem Maria with a perfect ending :) Inspiring :)
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Date: 7/11/2017 7:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. It really has to do about getting rid of ones ego in this lifetime. Meditation has helped me in a lot in difficult times. I really appreciate your visit...Maria
Date: 7/11/2017 2:27:00 AM
Maria Maria Maria. You are amazing and so talented. The last line says it all for man for life for souls. It is marvelously expressed. Take your bow please. Wonderful in its entirety. Have a wonderful morning and day.
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Date: 7/11/2017 6:10:00 AM
Lisa Lisa, What a welcome sight you are. Such lovely words my dear friend. Thank you I will, and you do the same...Maria
Date: 7/10/2017 6:45:00 AM
This was beautiful Maria, even without your notes at the bottom, this poem speaks spirituality and peace. I loved this work.
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Date: 7/10/2017 6:59:00 AM
Thank you Chris. Your insight is much appreciated and so is your appreciation...Maria
Date: 7/10/2017 4:30:00 AM
This is in praise of change and liberation as seen through the mind of one who has experienced a mental and spiritual rebirth, Maria. The contrast between the opening and closing stanzas is superb. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 7/10/2017 6:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Paul, your visits and sage like reviews is always appreciated. Meditation is indeed needed in this age of ours and a key to attaining our true potential...Congrats on your POTD again...Maria
Date: 7/10/2017 2:49:00 AM
For your poem to be understood one has to follow the path of enlightenment till a mystic he to become for to unearth the spiritual truths including that of reincarnation. A profound poem that the initiate could understand. Excellently written and artfully explained. Another POTW.? Good luck my friend, Maria!
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Date: 7/10/2017 3:47:00 AM
Thank your for mounting praise on my poem my dear friend. I just knew you would understand the precepts with your profound philosophical knowledge. Blessings...Maria

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