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IRON CROSS CONTACT LENS PAIR Image result for images of crosses in contact lenses

crosses in your eyes from special effects contacts hurt like bloody hell

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/29/2015 4:49:00 PM

lol, i can imagine

Paul Callus

Date: 7/27/2015 4:58:00 PM

I have never needed glasses (except now for reading), so have no experience of contact lenses. My son tried them for a while, but they did not agree with him, and soon ditched them! Excellent senryu! // paul

Daver Austin

Date: 7/27/2015 3:57:00 PM

Ah well, in my old age I no longer worry about the latest fads or looking macho. Achtung! Dat one contact would please der fuehrer. Love, daver

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/27/2015 11:51:00 AM

Anger to negative sight beautifully pictured. Few words of haiku but a volume hides in it. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/27/2015 9:13:00 AM

:-))) May I just echo Olive's comment ? hugs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/27/2015 8:27:00 AM

Andrea that is why eye glasses are more advisable than contact lenses!! simple but real!~Olive Eloisa =')

Kash Poet

Date: 7/27/2015 5:48:00 AM

I didn't know these crossed contact lenses.Good senryu.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/26/2015 8:56:00 AM

I mean just have to find that piece of paper where I wrote it. Soon. Catch up with you soon. I sure can be weird. I was able to read your email sweetie, thanks! Glad you had a wonderful weekend! good for you-- raining cats and dogs right now. sending you hugs!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/26/2015 8:53:00 AM

I have heard before of how some special contacts could hurt-- why is that? I have never tried contacts, nor I think I can (makes me shudder to stick something in my eye) but yup, your take in the contest is pretty cool--- at first I thought it could be cross eyed or something.... guess what? I forgot my email password!! haha, dumb me. I changed it recently-- but I don't want to reply on my phone, since it takes me forever. Don't want to change it again just yet, so I just have to find that cont

Kash Poet
Date: 7/27/2015 4:58:00 AM

email password? I think you will someday forget your name :) i keep a note of your names here time to time :)

Richard D Seal

Date: 7/26/2015 8:06:00 AM

As Emile Ford sang, "What do you wanna make those eyes at me for" lol. I think you've taken this contest too literally Petal, lol. Take care, Richard

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/26/2015 4:10:00 AM

This is funny Andrea. I don't understand that contest. I will have to go look at it again. GL in it! Some people will do anything to get noticed.

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 2:10:00 AM

the things we do to be unique lol, enjoyed this one Andrea

Lee Carter

Date: 7/26/2015 12:10:00 AM

Lol, I have no idea where to begin or what this contest is about, I thought reading yours might help, but no! lol ~lee

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/25/2015 10:50:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for making me laugh. Too funny! :-)Alexis

Jennifer Walker

Date: 7/25/2015 10:24:00 PM

I've never seen anything like this, good thing. I don't know if I would stare at a person with contacts like that or not. You made me laugh, sis.

Constance La France

Date: 7/25/2015 7:35:00 PM

Andrea, great for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/25/2015 6:53:00 PM

Oh that is just odd, our takes on the prompt was so completely different, I would really like to see what others have done with the phrase! Yours was clever and made me laugh :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2015 6:12:00 PM

ha ha ha love it Andrea - great take on the theme!:-) hugs jan xx