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Squeezing out a saturated rag. Torn asunder, pieces of a heart. Head, eyes, lips, arms — sore-sag. I’d thought I’d known weeping. I was only dreaming; nightmares hidden in caves, silently creeping. A mime’s hand, waving away his smile, pocketed in eternity’s change purse. “Geez,” muttered, as a flood beguiles. Tempest, no longer outside home’s border. It’s kicked in the door! Like a king it reigns, stores up blankets and dust like a hoarder. One who never kept account of compassion, relentlessly unprotected, battered with emotion. Comes crashing in - all sixty years of marital passion. Still, I’m touched by such all-encompassing love. The upside-down of Happily Ever-After, close to hell, and yet, something’s birthed…he puts on a glove, understanding the cruel depths, others have walked. O those years upon years of deaf, dumb and blind. The shadow of death, in his own backyard, chalked. I’m touched by heart-wrenching mortar. Silent is the grave of urned ashes — a cheerleader of son and daughters. Family forms a chain, squeezing of hands. Scent of cordial roses in the squall. Cross purposes - we’re no longer an island. 7/19/2021 Touch My Heart Sponsor: Regina McIntosh
Hebrews 4:15-16 NIV: For we do not have a high priest (Jesus) who is unable to sympathize with our weaknesses…Let us then approach the throne of grace with confidence, so that we may receive mercy and find grace to help us in our time of need. *Just as Jesus sympathizes with us, so we sympathize with each other, as we gain knowledge about suffering and death.

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Date: 7/26/2021 8:50:00 PM
This by itself was a great poem "I’m touched by heart-wrenching mortar. Silent is the grave of urned ashes — a cheerleader of son and daughters. " Well done Kim. No surprise there.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2021 4:53:00 AM
Thank you. Hugs ~
Date: 7/21/2021 2:48:00 PM
A reflective and emotive write, Kim! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2021 4:28:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 7/21/2021 4:12:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2021 5:08:00 AM
Thank you for reading, dear one! God bless you too!
Date: 7/20/2021 7:13:00 AM
Elegant and deep, definitely needs a rereading. Congrats on your win- may the circle be unbroken.
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Date: 7/20/2021 6:34:00 AM
'One who never kept account of compassion' Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/20/2021 3:58:00 AM
I love this, my friend, It's beautifully done. God bless you and congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/19/2021 10:31:00 PM
We should never have been an island really. Yet compassion is as important as prayer. When I am in need I pray to my dead wife also. Hugs
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Date: 7/19/2021 4:58:00 PM
I am certain, don't ask me how, He shares all our tears and joy. Don't know that experience need be the only teacher, of compassion and forgiveness...but it does seem to be our way. Excellent write!!
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Date: 7/19/2021 7:25:00 AM
"BELOVED, LET US LOVE ONE ANOTHER, FOR LOVE IS OF GOD AND EVERYONE WHO LOVETH IS BORN OF GOD AND KNOWETH GOD. HE THAT LOVETH NOT KNOWETH NOT GOD FOR GOD IS LOVE." 1 John 4:7-8 A good write my friend. Causes the reader to think on these things. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2021 8:18:00 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 7/19/2021 6:51:00 AM
The idea of happy ever after is pure worldly fantasy. But on the other life our Father prepared for us, then happiness will be forever. Think of those who hated in this life and know in the next there is pure happiness. I pray that you and I and many more will be in perfect bliss. Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2021 8:16:00 AM
I pray with you! Thank you for your lovely comment!

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