Criticism

It’s best to avoid offering Criticism. Praise is far more effective.

Yes, they rise at unexpected time from unexpected corners and attack us like serpents. Great monoku, dear Hilda.

Love this!

Venomous in a positive way ...XXX

This monoku has a strong bite to it--there’s a sharpness in the imagery that makes it stand out. The phrase "serpent rises from the jealous swamp" gives the feeling of unwanted criticism slithering in, uninvited and venomous.

Well, as a great man once said: to have detractors means, you are doing something right! I write for the joy, encouraged by the good comments...deeply analyzing the snide ones, which usually are only exposing the writer's own insecurities. A few words, but wisely put. Thank you, Hilda.

I hear you dear Hilda. Part of the reason why I left in 2019 was because so called constructive critism was sounding more like destructive critism. I didnt need that in my life. All the best, and take care...Hugs

Dear Hilda, your words cut straight to the heart of things, so sharp, yet full of truth. I love the way you capture the danger of unwarranted critique, that sneaky serpent. Yes, we need to be mindful of where we speak from, and the motives behind our words. Excellent! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

I get that alot dear hilda, sometimes we dont need criticism, or a response, but just a listening ear. Not sure if some criticize out of envy, seems more like their need to feel good about themselves. I love the way you’ve written this monoku and your word choices too in this, so powerful and poetic! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always

It just happens! Keep writing. No matter what, criticism comes our wat when least expected Smike, theank them Pangie xx

That 'swamp of jealousy' is another one that needs to be cleared out! But this one is p to each and every one of us... Commandment #10: Do not covet!

When not asked for criticism is useless.

Interesting one to ponder.

A theme of self protection against external judgement and the recognition of how envy can breed conflict or danger.Deep and profound

Hilda, Curious Monoku. What an ordeal in affirmation. -Richard