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Crimson Ribbon Jealousy

Crimson ribbon across the darkening sky Toys sweetly with exquisite hints azurite Sublime whisper in the stillness of the night Dulcet as a fluttering wings' butterfly Ignoring warnings of atrophy's caution Tightening the fatal corset to her heart Beware of jealousy's evil counterpart Watching it adrift beyond the horizon Neath veil opaque set free most venomous ache Draining weary soul of stagnant tears and fears With returning tide the hope of buoyant years Await sunrise as she awakes at daybreak Submitted on September 16, 2018 for contest ENCLOSED RHYME sponsored by DEAR HEART - RANKED 1ST

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 10/15/2018 8:33:00 PM

Beautiful Line, Congratulations on your 1st place win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 8:40:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Constance La France

Date: 10/2/2018 3:05:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, well done ~

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/2/2018 3:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dear Heart. I am honored.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/1/2018 6:22:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Line. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/1/2018 7:56:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Sandra.

John Gondolf

Date: 9/30/2018 1:56:00 PM

Beautifully written, Line, congrats on your well deserved win. John

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/30/2018 2:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, John. Most appreciated.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/30/2018 5:27:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, congratulations on your win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/30/2018 7:33:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tania.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/30/2018 4:50:00 AM

This is beautiful and most worthy of its first-placement in the contest, Line. Congratulations! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/30/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paul. Much appreciated.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/30/2018 2:50:00 AM

Congratulations to you as well on your top placement, well deserved xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/30/2018 7:33:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mike.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/29/2018 10:15:00 PM

This has such a hopeful message, really love 'fatal corset to my heart/jealousy's evil counterpart', congratulations on your win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2018 10:34:00 PM

Thanks, Michelle, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/29/2018 8:32:00 PM

This is just beautiful Line. I see why it took top honors! Congratulations my friend! I loved it! : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2018 10:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.

Joseph May

Date: 9/29/2018 7:57:00 PM

Very nicely penned Line..Congrats on your win..

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2018 10:31:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2018 7:54:00 PM

Wonderfully written, Line, awesome win

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2018 10:33:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/29/2018 7:44:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Line, the emotion, the imagery, the last line - stunning! Congratulations on your excellent win. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2018 10:32:00 PM

Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Susan.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/29/2018 7:33:00 PM

Excellent. Well written. Congratulations for your win :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2018 7:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Heidi. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/18/2018 7:01:00 PM

Well Done! We all await that sunrise.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/18/2018 7:12:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.