Crimped Memory

As eventide drew its curtains
around us,
there was nothing tame about it
when I went  into 
the woods with him,
for even though the moon beamed
pearlescent in its inky sky,
the wind was howling through the trees.

And though the weather -
for the bluster of the wind -
was inclement,
I could not deny my growing ardor.
As if in tune with the wind,
we pressed ourselves 
like feral creatues of the shadows
against each other.

We fell beneath an oak
whose constant rustle of leaves
became a metronome that measured
our two hearts’ steady thrum.
Stronger and then stronger still,
the oak’s leaves fluttered
as I rolled with him in ecstacy
on the forest’s floor.
It was as if he had the ability
to plumb the very depths of my desire.

I look back on that night remembering 
the every passionately delicious detail
and how even the next day,
the tang of his lips on mine
remained.

Decades later, I reminisce about
– like the worn pages
of an intensely romantic journal entry
that have many times been
unfolded and then refolded -
the memory of that night
which he crimped within my mind.

April 4, 2021
for John Hamilton's 
Eight Word Bardenesque Challenge Poetry Contest
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Mcintosh Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Love this, sweet lady. It's gorgeous. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Hamilton Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Congrats Andrea on this excellent write, very close to what Greg would write, unfortunately you gave yourself away by using him, doubtful Greg would write a romantic write about him. lol! Congrats anyway on a great write and win!
Hicks Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 7:23 PM
That does seem like a great starting point ... gives you stuff to work with and let your imagination flow. I think I’ve only done one contest that involved using a specific set of words. They were five words involving water like precipitation, hydration, crystallization etc., (words I would never think of including in a poem!) .... but it ended up become one of my post popular poems.
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 9:01 PM
I am not positive but Cinder Girl may have come from Buzz words. I am pretty sure some of my most popular poems did, such as Tale of Fire and Ice! It's pretty cool how that can work out!
Hicks Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Rolling on the forest floor with the one you love ... that is quite the fantasy (were it me I’d prefer the beach .... less ticks ;) ) Jokes aside, you did a good job with the words provided. It’s always a great adventure seeing what one can do with a random set of words ... course you’ve definitely had some practice beforehand with your “It Was in September” poem! Lol.
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 3:56 PM
I once belonged to a poetry group where we used "buzz words" The winner chosen among us each week would give ten words to us all to use in a poem. I think I have over a hundred poems here based off those Buzz poem challenges. It really is a great way to be inspired.
Poet Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 6:47 PM
Passionate memories, and delicious imagery, wish you luck in the contest Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 9:36 PM
also "made up" memories, my friend. you think I'd roll around naked on the ground in a wind storm? hahaha. I am delighted you liked the delicious imagery, however.
Theraven Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Andrea, That terrific rustle in the leaves and pages of a journal. Delicious should of been the ninth. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 9:01 PM
ok, now I've got your joke!!
Theraven Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 7:30 PM
Aren't you entering this poem in JH's Eight word Bardenesque challenge? -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 7:33 AM
hey what does this mean? Delicious should of been the ninth
Buhagiar Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Difficult words. I tried it. Let's both hope for the best.
Pandit Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 4:56 AM
Passionate journal entry it is. Enjoyed your poem reminiscing in memories. All the best, Andrea.
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