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Cricket's Song

Summer's eve, sitting on the porch The breeze soft upon my cheek The crickets sing their song to me My own Plein air symphony Mesmerized by the sound they make Sweet moments of quiet bliss Barbara Gorelick 1/16/15 Night Creatures Contest

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Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 3/15/2015 10:09:00 PM

Pretty and peaceful...lovely!....Peter

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2015 6:28:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Way to go..Have you ever had one to get in the house?..Congrats..Sara

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/21/2015 11:28:00 PM

Nicely crafted, congrats on the win Barbara...huggs

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/21/2015 6:44:00 PM

Very nice, Barbara...I could feel the warmth of the summer night and hear their song. Congrats on your win. Sandra

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/21/2015 10:42:00 AM

Loved it Barbara>love>Rajat

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/21/2015 8:02:00 AM

Lovely to read yours again...congrats, Barbara...hugs, Rhonda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/20/2015 10:19:00 PM

Barbara thats so very lovely! Congrats on big win!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/20/2015 7:13:00 PM

I love the use of plien air! Congrad's on your win. Light & love

Jan Allison

Date: 1/20/2015 2:27:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/20/2015 2:02:00 PM

This is a lovely winning poem, Barbara. In the countryside, where I live, we used to get lots of them, but recently their numbers have dwindled, and that's a shame....they do make music together! #7 // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/18/2015 11:01:00 PM

I too love the sound of crickets! Good luck in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/18/2015 10:56:00 PM

Ahhh, Nature's lullaby. A lovely creation and entry Barbara. I hope to see it on the winner's list, up high! #7

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/18/2015 4:58:00 PM

I love the sound of the cricket's song in the summertime, and I enjoyed your poem just as much. A lovely entry for the contest! Good luck to you, Barbara!... This reminded me of an old poem of mine titled "Serenity".

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/17/2015 11:36:00 PM

Enjoyed this one immensely my friend. I especially love the night sounds in summer out in the rural areas where one call hear quite clearly the many sounds of Nature. Super 7 on this fine poem..

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/16/2015 9:24:00 AM

The author paints the calmness of the moment and creates an atmosphere of serenity. Well done. #7

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2015 7:30:00 AM

Absolutely delightful Barbara! I think this will place very well for you:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/16/2015 6:59:00 AM

A serene summer scene, Barbara! I also named mine Cricket's Song...great minds think alike! Have a blessed day. Hugs, Rhonda