Creek Sounds - Wujue

creek sounds / strong stones lie
stream song / low croak sigh
sparse rain / hot stones crack
deaf ears / dry worlds die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gasun Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 1:03 AM
Congratulations on your win and this beautiful jueju my dear poet friend Linda! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Fowler Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Hi Len. Thank you for your sweet comments, as always. :)
La France Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 4:42 AM
Linda, congratulations on your win, wonderful !
Fowler Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Thank you Constance!
Richards Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 2:02 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Thank you Suzette. I appreciate the challenges you present. :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 12:57 PM
I love this. I have written one too not posted yet. This form is SO difficult
Fowler Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Have confidence Andrea. :) I'm not sure I did it exactly correctly, butI think I met the "grammaticality" requirements. LOL Thanks for the sweet comment! :)
Poet Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 10:45 AM
Creatively and wonderfully penned, Linda. Good luck with the contest
Fowler Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 10:52 AM
Thank you Lasaad. I hope I followed the form correctly. :)
Mcintosh Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 4:01 AM
Wonderful. I don't know if I can do this :) Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
Fowler Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 6:04 AM
I'm sure you can my sweet talented poet friend! I'm not sure I got it 'right', but it was a fun exercise. Thanks for stopping by with nice comments Gina! :)
Peck Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 1:50 PM
I love this, Linda. It's a great poem of drought-prone areas and an unsettled Earth!
Fowler Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 2:48 PM
Thank you Ann. You got what I was trying to portray! :)
Lane Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 12:02 PM
Makes perfect sense to me, Linda. The sound of a running creek really does sound like a song of nature.
Fowler Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Thank you! I appreciate your visit and always, your comments. :)
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