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Creek Near Down

down the  stairs
down  the creek
creek is down
creek is flowing
flowing fast
flowing under
under glass
under pass
pass it over
pass it slow
slow poke
slow down
down and around
down for the count
count the money
count is under
under siege
under the sun
sun is hot
sun went down
down beat
down south
south west
south bound
bound up
bound down
down the road
down time
time out
time to go
go slow
go under
under appreciate
under paid
paid down
paid up
up the creek
up or down
down wind
down a well
well is full
well is deep
deep pockets
deep and down
down and out
down and down
down under
down bridge
bridge 
under


 

© Eve Roper 8/11/2015


Contest Name: Down Under
 Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi

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Sara Kendrick Date: 9/12/2015 8:07:00 AM Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 9/8/2015 3:08:00 PM Congratulations on your placing in Debbie's contest! This flows smoothly like the creek that inspired it:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/11/2015 8:14:00 AM Thank you! Hugs Eve

Skat A Date: 9/8/2015 9:02:00 AM Eve, Congratulations on your -Down Under- win. Love .....SKAT** Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/11/2015 8:14:00 AM Thank you! Hugs Eve

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/7/2015 4:23:00 PM Eve hon the last few lines are wrong - this would be right [ down and out/down town- town under/town bridge-bridge-under] YOU came so close great effort! Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/11/2015 8:13:00 AM Hello Debbie, I did fix it before but I noticed it didn't let me corrected; the website has being having a lot of glitches thank goodness I try to save all my work. This is the one I had corrected. Thank you so very much for your help. Hugs Eve Eve Roper Date: 9/7/2015 5:57:00 PM Thank you, Debbie, I'm honored to have been in the contest Hugs Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/6/2015 11:42:00 PM Superb winning write Eve, big congrats! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/11/2015 8:13:00 AM Thank you! Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/12/2015 12:53:00 AM Gosh, I still don't get this form, but you sure make it look like a breeze. It had a great flow, Eve!! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 8/12/2015 1:23:00 AM Thank you, Andrea, thought it was but then it got confusing towards the end.

Constance La France Date: 8/11/2015 5:47:00 PM Eve, at first look this form seems easy but it isn' t that easy when you get into it especially that ending and title, best of luck, just a little edit and you will be good to go and thanks for visiting my solitude poem Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 8/11/2015 9:04:00 PM Thank you, B.W., I hope I did it right this time. Hugs Eve

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/11/2015 5:20:00 PM The last 4 lines are wrong, check the directions in the contest, please, you have time. [lines 49 & 50 are 1 word Eve] Light & Love Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 8/11/2015 3:34:00 PM You went is many directions Eve...I bet if you started with the same words again it would turn out totally different....Tim Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/11/2015 8:09:00 AM Thank you dear friend , I should try that. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison Date: 8/11/2015 11:54:00 AM Gosh Eve i have never tried this form before - think it is too much of a challenge for me ! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 8/11/2015 12:12:00 PM I thought the same but it turned out very easy, try it won't hurt, like your footle yours would be funny hugs eve