Creative Writing

I often think of the sea,
not so much of vastness
but of depth, and what I
can't see, all the life just
beneath the surface – sort
of like, a newborn, 70 years
from now; sunlight blotting
out the sky, until rescued by
night...each of us a legacy
of many – 

we find one another again, in 
the shallow eddies – where waters
meet in manageable pools, 
our circles pushing back against
a far greater current – 
                            Where tide
tips the shore, we are nestles
of shelly kisses...sharing what
we can recall of both slippery
and pointed journeys –

in a real sense
all our forms and words
are a bit cliché
creative writing
the antithetical 
of language
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Proxenos Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 11:46 AM
I think you write beautifully and certainly so creatively, and with depth, meaning, and passion Joe. Love this poem yes, I do believe that creative poetry is not understood many a time and therefore antithetical to any spoken language. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
DiMino Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 2:33 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer; I like all forms of poetry, but seem to gravitate more toward Free Verse. It seems to work best for me. Blessings my friend!
Roper Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 10:21 PM
"we find one another again, in the shallow eddies – where waters meet in manageable pools, our circles pushing back against a far greater current " , great line, Joe. Well said.. I like the whole verse.
DiMino Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 5:17 AM
Thank you, Eve; very kind of you. Thank so much. Joe.
Baker Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 8:03 AM
A POTD quality poem, Joe ... I especial like the phase "where tide tips the shore", well actually the whole verse. So well written with depth and clarity that picking favorite lines or verses is difficult. This one goes to FAVs. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and poetry with us, Joe. Write On! Bill
DiMino Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Thank you, Bill; you totally made my day. Blessings my friend!
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