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I often think of the sea, not so much of vastness but of depth, and what I can't see, all the life just beneath the surface – sort of like, a newborn, 70 years from now; sunlight blotting out the sky, until rescued by night...each of us a legacy of many – we find one another again, in the shallow eddies – where waters meet in manageable pools, our circles pushing back against a far greater current – Where tide tips the shore, we are nestles of shelly kisses...sharing what we can recall of both slippery and pointed journeys – in a real sense all our forms and words are a bit cliché creative writing the antithetical of language

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Date: 2/11/2022 11:46:00 AM
I think you write beautifully and certainly so creatively, and with depth, meaning, and passion Joe. Love this poem yes, I do believe that creative poetry is not understood many a time and therefore antithetical to any spoken language. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/11/2022 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer; I like all forms of poetry, but seem to gravitate more toward Free Verse. It seems to work best for me. Blessings my friend!
Date: 2/9/2022 10:21:00 PM
"we find one another again, in the shallow eddies – where waters meet in manageable pools, our circles pushing back against a far greater current " , great line, Joe. Well said.. I like the whole verse.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/10/2022 5:17:00 AM
Thank you, Eve; very kind of you. Thank so much. Joe.
Date: 2/9/2022 8:03:00 AM
A POTD quality poem, Joe ... I especial like the phase "where tide tips the shore", well actually the whole verse. So well written with depth and clarity that picking favorite lines or verses is difficult. This one goes to FAVs. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and poetry with us, Joe. Write On! Bill
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/9/2022 8:40:00 AM
Thank you, Bill; you totally made my day. Blessings my friend!

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