Creation of a New Day

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1st Place Winner

Kim Bond published my poem in her ebook, Blessed Creation: A Christian Poetry Collection. You can find her book on drawneartochrist.com

CREATION OF A NEW DAY bliss carved from crimson dawn. sailboat, glides by, slow, peaceful – down a tangerine river. sunshine shyly hides behind the dawn’s smile. puffy clouds dance, across warm tree tops. bold hues of light permeate the happy hills - red, green, blue chorus of hallelujah.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/8/2023 11:35:00 AM

You have a magical contact with nature plus the ability to put it in poetic form. Congratulations for being a future and put poems add.first place winner! Pangioya

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/8/2023 12:07:00 PM

Thank you, Pangie! Always delighted by your visits!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/3/2023 8:12:00 AM

Excellent work, Kim, so artistic in imagery and expression, brilliant:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 8:56:00 AM

Thank you so much, sweet Joanna!

Jay Narain

Date: 7/2/2023 2:51:00 PM

Nice poem with illustration

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2023 4:28:00 PM

Thank you!

John Watt

Date: 2/25/2020 5:17:00 PM

Kim, this is a beautiful song of creation and the daily re-creation God affords us in nature. Love all your colors and nature images, and especially the last line. I'm going to be singing Morning Has Broken now! Hugs ~ John

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2020 6:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, John!