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Creation -The Star of David Style

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~Creation~ (Star of David) God Is the Creator He made the whole Universe formed man The Bible doesn't explain where God came from But it says clear that He was always there This a mystery to me too But I just believe, accept it God created all perfect In fact made us all good and pure Adam and Eve just had wonderful lives They ruled over everything that God made Adam didn't have to work for a living Face pain or death till Both disobeyed After that It was Hell Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010
May.15.2016 ~Authors Notes: The "Star of David" is a poetry form created by Dorian Petersen Potter, aka ladydp2000, on October 22,2009.

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Date: 5/15/2016 8:54:00 AM
Very cool form!
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/17/2016 11:51:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Richard, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

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