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Advised to stay indoors this afternoon- surprised, because the sun was shining bright. Revised, the weather outlook quickly changed; despised was heavy rain and thunder-fright. Just like that, the sky turned a dark gray- a gust of wind came swishing through the trees! Dust and leaves whirled round to fill the air. Trust it's over soon- sun come out, please! June 8, 2021 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Lento - 8 Lines Sponsor: Joseph May Judged: 07/04/2021 Lento Poem: The first word of each line must rhyme Lines 2 and 4 of each stanza must rhyme

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Date: 7/5/2021 5:46:00 AM
sounds like our british weather, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/4/2021 10:15:00 PM
Nice write capturing the whimsy weather. Congratulations, Sandra.
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Date: 7/4/2021 9:50:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/10/2021 1:51:00 PM
Happiness is this poem! Enjoyed!
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Date: 6/8/2021 7:28:00 PM
You've done a nice job, Sandra. I wish you every success in Joseph May's contest.
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Date: 6/8/2021 4:27:00 PM
The storms can come about so fast, as you describe. Well done Sandra. Stay safe :)
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Date: 6/8/2021 3:49:00 PM
As long as sun comes out after the rain, all is well again. An excellent Lento poem Sandra… Belle
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