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Crazy Hurt

Sleeping sound, when I got this feeling. Woke up out my sleep cause somewhere he's out being deceiving, eyes pop open tryna get my thoughts together don't know if I should go back to sleep or go catch him creep'n in this cold ass weather, back and fourth ideas switch in my mind , I'm feeling colD but confused this time I won't be so kind. I jump in my car thank god for GPS found his ass parked fkn a b%#*^ next to that ups ! Opened her car door and let my adrenalin play, I hit him while holding her then all of a sudden my mind went grey. I said a few words took that b*%#+ clothes and walked back to my car tried to feel some type of way but I didn't get far ! Angry but numb I go home and begin to write , all I can say is I'm feeling cold and I now see the light but goodnight !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/2/2016 1:44:00 PM
This is awesome... Thank you so much for this wonderful share
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Date: 5/2/2016 5:12:00 AM
Hi Fatima, I hope to see a new one from you.... Come on, I know you have more up your sleeves...SO nice to have you read one of mine. Linda
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Date: 5/1/2016 6:28:00 AM
Awesome poem, Fatima.... Linda
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Fatima Alzadjali
Date: 5/1/2016 2:37:00 PM
Thank you

Book: Shattered Sighs