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CRAZY BEHIND THESE BLUES

Hello, sweet brown eyed girl
I'm that guy with the blues
Can't disguise, locked in eyes
Think I might be crazy about you

Give a subtle hint of a smile
So fast I'll be across this floor
Buy you a drink, we'll dance
Later, I'll walk you out the door

Wow, you're lit up like the sun
Giving me a look that I can't fight
All my life I've dreamed of this
I can't wait, until we kiss.. tonight 

That's when he passed by me
Strutting slowly over to you...

Girl, those sweet brown eyes
You never even saw these blues
Pure fantasy to hold you in my arms
Across the room, all your charms
They were never mine to lose
It looks like I'll be alone tonight

Be walking home, all alone.. tonight
I'm that crazy guy with the blues

Yeah, I'm the guy with the blues
Going crazy behind my blues
Crazy behind these blues 

~Lyric Man

Note: Have you ever thought someone was looking,smiling, or waving at you and then you look, smile, and wave back only to realize that they weren't actually looking, smiling, or waving at you. I have and it can be kind of embarrassing. I wanted to write a tune with that ideals mind, but put it into a romantic setting. This is what I came up with. I hope you enjoy it!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/27/2018 2:04:00 AM
Heyyy, I really like this one, such a true observation on every day life and so well pieced together with your lyrical words. Xx ( please check out my poem, Wonderful Man) fabulous stuff.. Jenny.x
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Date: 7/12/2018 6:54:00 PM
Lyric Man, these days things are so much harder. Loyalty is something you never find and you mainly see girls getting theirs hearts broken by guys but what we don't see are the guys getting their hearts broken by girls and ti know that there are still guys out there who love a girl to pieces and is willing to do anything for them. Well that's extraordinary.
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Date: 7/10/2018 2:36:00 AM
Lyric Man, well crafted ditty of a situation many have been in. I like the way you ran with it, then snapped out, and slapped yourself, in a literary way, then washed up on blues shore. Been there, done that (funny I was reminiscing on the other day, younger years getting pitcher of beer poured over my head by girl of my attentions, who just wasn't having it, bar room brawls with jealous boyfriends or zealous suitors, or thrown out by my scruff by burly bouncer) DRMF
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:28:00 AM
Can be a real bummer... have actually done it!!! RED FACED!!! LOL
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:23:00 AM
I like this one...I can see this being a scene in a movie..a good read
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Date: 7/7/2018 6:07:00 AM
Nice play on the blues and yeah. The funny thing is you get embarrassed but you are probably the only one that noticed. Rejection is awful real or imaginary.
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Date: 7/5/2018 4:06:00 PM
Nicely penned Lyric man. It makes one try to compose music to fit it. I think most good poetry is lyrics that have no melody (yet)
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Date: 7/5/2018 11:33:00 AM
Know the felling Lyric Man, guess we all do. Great work my friend. Best work for a lyricist, is to remind us of how much we truly are just alike. You have a great talent for that...
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:42:00 AM
Aww, you won't be alone for long,
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:36:00 AM
Cool situational romanticism, Lyric Man. Misty lyrical be this sweet coin beat ... when the meet-a-maid toll leaves your heart empty. I feel the blues vibe on this mighty fine lyric poem. Love and more love always.
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:26:00 AM
Do you compose music for your lyrics? If so, do you perform your pieces?
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:44:00 AM
This would be an ouch moment especially for a nerd or someone of low esteem.. Brilliant write could be coutry or blues Love it... James
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:39:00 AM
I can almost hear this put to music. You put me right in the room with you. Great work! Kurt
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:17:00 AM
I'd rather be an old house with a romantic character than a Casa Nova! Great Write, Lyric!
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:17:00 AM
I'd rather be an old house with a romantic character than a Casa Nova! Great Write, Lyric!
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:30:00 AM
A wonderful write capturing the mood to a T. This poem complements mine, Lonely, written many moons ago.
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:22:00 AM
I love this! We all have those awkward moments.
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:20:00 AM
Wow lol yes hasn't everyone! Gotta admit you do make me miss my errrr romantic writes. Maybe this help inspire that ...thanks! But what a lovely expressed thought this was! So glad you suggested I stop by this morning! Beautiful expressed my friend! Hugs Brenda
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:08:00 AM
Ha yep, that's happened to me a few times down at the local, nice writing
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Date: 7/5/2018 7:11:00 AM
Having the blues for a brown eyed girl :) ..I enjoyed this write LM..
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:51:00 AM
This has happen to everybody at least once, I'm sure. Since I got married I haven't had the problem---I simply don't wave back---lol Great lyrics I wish I could hear the tune
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:31:00 AM
Oh, yes, I enjoy your lyric lyricm, Lyric Man, you are the best in it!
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:13:00 AM
It was all going well, till the other guy showed up. You captured the moments well that many have experienced..and the embarrassing disappointment. Great song, LM.
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:06:00 AM
A very captivating theme, superbly composed my friend. And yes, that has happened to me as well, in my youth. That beautiful girl, her pretty eyes and bright smile, stayed in my mind for many months.... A fav..
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Date: 7/5/2018 5:52:00 AM
Superbly written my friend, L.M. Much enjoyed!
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