Craziest Time Under the Bottle

Scene beneath is utterly true
   Veracious (ridiculous) account
   Told by me from baby eye view,  
    - Utterances she was without 


Eighth day in the cold bright realm, hungry again 
               Feeds feature foremost! 
Bundled snug in my Grandma's rhythmic arms, 
                  grizzling kept at bay
Lovely Mummy eagerly took chance to shower
          Unconcerned by her absence 
Have fresh bottle of expressed breast milk
           " Hungry, darling Possum?" 
Grandma coos, getting comfy on the lounge 


Gaze eyed, flared nostril enticed, elastic lips pursed
                           I'm ravenous! Now! 
Lain awkwardly on Gran's lap, while she softly curses
                 " ..... Get this lid off, if, how ... "
Sprawled hands clasp my face - what's causing delay? 
               -  I'll chat when I'm twice the size! 
Tedious minutes of empty tummy lid wrestling pass us
                     Hollers supersede grunts
Jiggling knees threaten to chasm as she concentrates


Splashed suddenly, a solitary drop of nourishment 
                  dissolves in my wailing throat
Blinked away white curtain showcases Gran's stun
                  Milk quickly cools on my back
Hesitant yelled confessions to shampoo lather Mama 
                    cause more curses, taps off
Towel wrapped, she dresses red faced me in dry clothes
                Grumbles over Gran's innacuracy
Guaged bottle lid's removal happens best when tipped up!

         - You don't need to teats me how to drink!! 
                    
 
          
                       Word Count is 200
                           26th July 2020
      
             Written for Contest: 'Craziest Time' 
                 Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/27/2020 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest, Sigrid!! A great combination of narrative and lyric!!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/28/2020 2:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Newton. It's very dear of you..
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