Cradle of Life

Intense heat ripples across 
the vast sand dunes of the Serengeti 
where it intersects with the
silent shores of a rare desert lake 
a calm, cool oasis for both 
man and beast. 

Taj Mahal of the desert 
it is a liquid cradle of life
coveted by a thousand tongues 
as languid lake mesmerizes
drawing all that breathes
to its scarce waters, casting a
mirage like spell, beckoning 
with reflections set off by
the hot desert sun, to come. 

Salvation for the weary traveler 
primal waters implore, drink!
Drink to the full, and be filled!
For blessings, unforeseen 
are at this footstool of life
a sacred spot, touched by
the hands of heaven
offering a haven of rest, respite 
and tranquility for all who want. 




Written on 4/9/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/28/2019 1:00:00 PM
A well thought out piece. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/26/2019 7:34:00 PM
Great poem Laura, got a top win, very deserving, but I see it got a win before not what I asked for but I'll let it slide!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/26/2019 8:56:00 PM
Oh, I didn’t know that about another win! Sorry...but thank you for the placement, John! :)
Date: 6/2/2019 11:38:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem ~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/2/2019 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for placing me in your contest! I’m so happy you liked it! :)
Date: 4/10/2019 8:22:00 PM
Just beautiful; good luck in the contest.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2019 11:17:00 PM
Thanks again, M.L.! :)
Date: 4/10/2019 8:29:00 AM
I've reread this a few times and have now added it to my fav list. Well done once again. This should be published.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2019 1:54:00 PM
I feel honored that you would consider this poem a fave, David! Thank you! :)
Date: 4/9/2019 6:56:00 PM
Good subject, well written with really good images for the reader, good luck
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/9/2019 7:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Frederic! Your comments mean a lot to me as I admire your poems and talent! :)
Date: 4/9/2019 5:23:00 PM
Wow. Great poem. Such imagery. You really nailed this one. Just flows off the tongue. Well done.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/9/2019 5:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, David! I had to rework this poem several times...glad it flows now. :)
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