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Cradle of Life

Intense heat ripples across the vast sand dunes of the Serengeti where it intersects with the silent shores of a rare desert lake a calm, cool oasis for both man and beast. Taj Mahal of the desert it is a liquid cradle of life coveted by a thousand tongues as languid lake mesmerizes drawing all that breathes to its scarce waters, casting a mirage like spell, beckoning with reflections set off by the hot desert sun, to come. Salvation for the weary traveler primal waters implore, drink! Drink to the full, and be filled! For blessings, unforeseen are at this footstool of life a sacred spot, touched by the hands of heaven offering a haven of rest, respite and tranquility for all who want. Written on 4/9/2019

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Date: 9/28/2019 1:00:00 PM
A well thought out piece. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/26/2019 7:34:00 PM
Great poem Laura, got a top win, very deserving, but I see it got a win before not what I asked for but I'll let it slide!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/26/2019 8:56:00 PM
Oh, I didn’t know that about another win! Sorry...but thank you for the placement, John! :)
Date: 6/2/2019 11:38:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem ~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/2/2019 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for placing me in your contest! I’m so happy you liked it! :)
Date: 4/10/2019 8:22:00 PM
Just beautiful; good luck in the contest.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2019 11:17:00 PM
Thanks again, M.L.! :)
Date: 4/10/2019 8:29:00 AM
I've reread this a few times and have now added it to my fav list. Well done once again. This should be published.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2019 1:54:00 PM
I feel honored that you would consider this poem a fave, David! Thank you! :)
Date: 4/9/2019 6:56:00 PM
Good subject, well written with really good images for the reader, good luck
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/9/2019 7:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Frederic! Your comments mean a lot to me as I admire your poems and talent! :)
Date: 4/9/2019 5:23:00 PM
Wow. Great poem. Such imagery. You really nailed this one. Just flows off the tongue. Well done.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/9/2019 5:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, David! I had to rework this poem several times...glad it flows now. :)

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