Cradle of Life

Intense heat ripples across 
the vast sand dunes of the Serengeti 
where it intersects with the
silent shores of a rare desert lake 
a calm, cool oasis for both 
man and beast. 

Taj Mahal of the desert 
it is a liquid cradle of life
coveted by a thousand tongues 
as languid lake mesmerizes
drawing all that breathes
to its scarce waters, casting a
mirage like spell, beckoning 
with reflections set off by
the hot desert sun, to come. 

Salvation for the weary traveler 
primal waters implore, drink!
Drink to the full, and be filled!
For blessings, unforeseen 
are at this footstool of life
a sacred spot, touched by
the hands of heaven
offering a haven of rest, respite 
and tranquility for all who want. 




Written on 4/9/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 1:00 PM
A well thought out piece. Congrats on your win.
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:34 PM
Great poem Laura, got a top win, very deserving, but I see it got a win before not what I asked for but I'll let it slide!
Leiser Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:56 PM
Oh, I didn’t know that about another win! Sorry...but thank you for the placement, John! :)
La France Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem ~
Leiser Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Thank you, Constance, for placing me in your contest! I’m so happy you liked it! :)
Kiser Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 8:22 PM
Just beautiful; good luck in the contest.
Leiser Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 11:17 PM
Thanks again, M.L.! :)
Mchattie Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 8:29 AM
I've reread this a few times and have now added it to my fav list. Well done once again. This should be published.
Leiser Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 1:54 PM
I feel honored that you would consider this poem a fave, David! Thank you! :)
Parker Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Good subject, well written with really good images for the reader, good luck
Leiser Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Thanks so much, Frederic! Your comments mean a lot to me as I admire your poems and talent! :)
Mchattie Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 5:23 PM
Wow. Great poem. Such imagery. You really nailed this one. Just flows off the tongue. Well done.
Leiser Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 5:30 PM
Thanks so much, David! I had to rework this poem several times...glad it flows now. :)
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