Cradle of Emptiness

Although moon glints, I am inconsolable
 This womb,  your harbor
Nourished by splendor of days,  nights
While we wait in anticipation for life...

Fifteen weeks it is,  come evening
As I imagine a baby so pure
Dwindling her toes, chuckling aloud:
Till your pulse beat slips  ticks away
As my voice quietly murmurs,
   'Rachel, fight the gush,
Your pink cradle waits for you at home.'

I wail through hours, ripped by breaths forlorn
The navel's cord
Disconnecting in the thorn of  frozen silence,
When labor pains my body endures


Nothing to gain, everything to lose
Duskfall wakes, new morn vanishes:

Looking at you on gauzy sheets
The  ghost of emptiness rears-- 
Depriving a cradle of laughter unborn
That I cannot imagine an  angel winging,

O not now...
Not when I ache and moan unto heaven, aggrieved ~



Contest of john lawless, Let 'Er Rip Part #2 
~ Based on my first cousin's experience
12/14/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dutta Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 11:45 AM
I have gone also though same pain of miscarriage of my first baby. Later I am blessed with two daughters. now I have a sweet grand daughter. Congrats to win on your wonderful poem that touched my heart.
Allison Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 3:42 PM
I have tears reading your touching poem Nette. the pain of miscarriage must be something a woman never gets over:-( dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Makama Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
Lindley Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 10:42 AM
To me this is truly a masterpiece on a great and horrific sadness. One hat brings tears to those that have known such epic sorrows, as have I myself, with two beloved babies(a son and later a daughter) born dead with my first wife, so many decades ago! A fav, a wondrous, melancholy poetic gem..
One Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 6:17 AM
This one touches the heart Nette...
Kannan Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Oh... This is so sad and powerful,Nette... Beautifully written... Could feel the pain and loss through your words...
Pandit Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 7:10 AM
A heartfelt and sad depiction..it feels real because it is..experienced by many. You gave them a voice in this touching rendering in your usual artistic style. Well done, nette.
Kiser Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 5:18 AM
So sad and difficult to bear the loss. You've penned it very well with imagery and emotion that is powerful. Well penned.
Vaso Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 10:35 PM
This is so sad Nette, such a beautiful expressed poem.
Rose  Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 7:22 PM
How sad when a child dies before it has a chance to fulfill a life purpose. You have described the feelings so well Nette, thanks for sharing,
Datu Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 4:40 PM
This magnificent poem got me riled up. My sister waited to become pregnant after 4 years only to have a miscarriage. It's alright to question heaven in the beginning. Thank you for being ' vulnerable!'
Sands Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Oh wow. What a powerful poem Nette. It really hits the reader! Well done. Bless you :)
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