Crabbing

A disturbance in the sand
betrayed their hide
and when prodded by a rake,
claws shot up
primed to latch onto
a careless finger or toe.

A big "bluey" had a fearsome
bite and seemed
to prefer to sacrifice a claw
rather than let go.  Their grip
on the rake, though, was their
undoing, hanging on whilst
being lifted up then shaken
loose to fall helpless
into a floating tub.
By morning's end
the tub would be 
a writhing fill of crabs
clawing to free themselves
from a hopeless fate.
It was a pathetic sight.

Hauled ashore, most 
were still alive when Dad
and I got them home.
They wriggled and bubbled 
in the damp bottom 
of the metal tub.
I can remember the salty smell
of what I thought was fear
let out by their silent screams.
Their suffering seemed 
too much to justify a feed. 
Then I would think of Jesus 
and the fish he caught
to expunge my childhood guilt.
Taken out and washed clean 
they would be dropped
into a big iron pot and boiled
until they turned bright red,
the color of demons stoking 
hellfire in a bible picture book.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Summers Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 2:56 PM
Crabbing, lots of fun though I used a net instead of a rake. The results are the same…good eating. Salt smell/fear…like that. It seems you got over your squeamishness. John
Willason Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Miles of shallow beaches a short distance trom home fed boyhood with crabs and cockles (shellfish)...the taste of that seafood still lingers....
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