Cowbirds of South Africa
Senryu and Poem, below:
I
Autumn, dawn, clouds, lake:
Flutter of white storm - trash?
Hundred cowbirds: commute
II - The Poem:
Maybe some 200 cowbirds-
All white with adapted, heron-like beaks -
Flutter as leaders honk instructions
Above the misty waters:
Autumn here has begun
But I saw manybnests, never such a commute!
Maybe more residents have added numbers -
Joyfully adding to surprise & smiles -
But I am up earlier, to see a neighbor
Before he leaves for his job.
Happily, above the terrible trash around,
Amen for this Golden treasure of a lake - albeit polluted -
Offers comorants, ducks, cowbirds and coots
A home so near me. To ease exile from clean Europe
Good Note: GRACE TODAY FOR THIS WRITE
Dankie Jesus
Usually, internet service, ads, perishing airtime/ data, or PS submission pages malfunction at the slightest chance. This poem was meant
To Be, Hallelujah. Praise Die Heer, as we say here, for allowing
not even a word or line to get lost ... Because I fell asleep in the middle of the third line of the three-line senryu above. My concerns on
awaking from a surprise nap so early on Saturday turned to
all Gratitude And Glory to the Maker of Man, of Creation, of creative
Works of human geniuses, and smart cellphones. Today mine was smart! Amen
Copyright © Anil Deo | Year Posted 2022
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