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Covering the Rage

The pounding palpatation, the moistening of palms Swallowing, an obstacle, wave goodbye to calm Breathing now is labored, balling of the fist Paranoid my eyes have bled, consumed in a red mist It's lucky that my tongue is glued to the roof of my mouth At least I'm keeping some control of things I shouldn't shout Things I shouldn't scream and rage and spasm til I ache Hands behind my back so I dont punch you in the face It's not that I'm not used to it, it happens every night It's the root of every problem, subject of every fight The time has come to ask myself, how longer can I hack it. Or the answer to a good night's sleep? Sleep with seperate blankets. 1st October 2011

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Date: 2/12/2012 2:47:00 AM
JODIE,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:12:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats on your win, Jodie! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/7/2012 6:06:00 PM
I do hope all is well withe you. I remember sadly the night I moved from my ex's bed. VERY powerful write nice use of alliteration and metaphor! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/7/2012 1:34:00 PM
congrats Jodie on a marvelous win for this incredible poetry entry luv..
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:08:00 AM
Congrats, Jodie. Great piec. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/7/2012 9:46:00 AM
Love this. Happen to know a blanket hugger. Congratulations Jodie
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Give Me Your Best Shot" contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2011 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write! Lori
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, Jodie
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Date: 11/13/2011 8:37:00 PM
A blanket hogger? And the poor innocents don't even know it. My hubby couldn't turn over with out taking the blanket along. Great emotional control. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/13/2011 6:41:00 PM
Oh no Jodie, sounds like marital blues, split the blanket and sleep on the sofa maybe. Smile. Congratulations on a worthy poem win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/3/2011 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Show Me The Anger" contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2011 12:26:00 AM
Gee, this poem was just great. I was reading and at first i thought, this really describes anger, but the last line just threw me! well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/2/2011 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win!!!!!!!!!!------Lori
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Date: 10/2/2011 6:47:00 PM
Congrats Jodie on first place win with this excellent expression of emotion luv..
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