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Cover Girl

Splashed in lilac scent and robe of satin She contemplates her choice of dresses In her hand a string of pearls In her trance, a cover girl- A curling iron upon her tresses Pale as a mushroom In her room A counter spread, from where she grooms Her closet filled with many choices Her cupboard filled with many faces- Eleven selves on seven shelves A jar of this, a tube of that To smooth a line, or cover time A puff of magic on her skin Erase, define, her artist’s brush Will shape a line, or paint a blush- A peach to ripen on her cheek A berry, picked, to add mystique A bit of blue upon the lid A sparkle brown extends the lash She twists her mouth…a dash of shine A shadow, cream, a paste, a gloss…. A drawer of rainbows from the shop A Cover Girl lies in jar Yet, what has mattered most of all is all the beauty in her heart ..............................................................................................................

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Date: 4/20/2014 6:53:00 AM
many good wishes on your placement in the Tanka contest here Susan..'
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Date: 4/16/2014 5:53:00 PM
A very good poem Carrie, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/16/2014 7:32:00 AM
Grats on your win. Awesome poem you presented here, good job
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Date: 4/15/2014 2:33:00 PM
impressive.beautiful.awesome.^_^ this is one superb write for a woman in the world of fashion, a cover girl!! ..well stated life, a hardest one indeed... COngratulations, Carrie!!! ^__^
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Date: 4/15/2014 8:33:00 AM
I am impressed Carrie, congratulations.
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Date: 4/15/2014 2:03:00 AM
I really like this approach you took. Nice work here, my friend. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/15/2014 12:32:00 AM
Great entry Carrie. I really like this one. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2014 11:56:00 PM
I loved the rhyming and the smooth word flow. I also liked how you ended this poem with a question. Yes, our inner beauty is much more important than our outer beauty! A wonderful poem, Carrie! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 8/8/2013 6:12:00 PM
Wow perceptive fav line [ Eleven selves on seven shelves] Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/8/2013 2:42:00 PM
ah, that is the question, indeed! great poem, carrie! congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/8/2013 10:08:00 AM
delightful glimpse behind the scenes congrats Shadow x smiles
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Date: 8/7/2013 10:05:00 PM
so thought-provokong and as always, well scribed, carrie... miles of congrats to you for a high win!..:) huggs
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Date: 8/7/2013 12:14:00 PM
Amazing use of words and strangling act of the thoughts... that is just awesome.... fabulous poem ..Carrie .. keep it up.. :)
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Date: 8/7/2013 9:29:00 AM
Carrie, wonderful in every way... :-) . Congratulations! thank you for making my day a nice one... When you have time enjoy my beautiful blog * Called "Title That Reminds Me Of You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15763&PoetID=18720 ---always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:13:00 PM
Carrie, You win too many contest, I am running out of adjectives for you, oh well, my problem. Seriously, this is a very good write. Congrats on making Debbie's winners' list................S.Ronthorpe - "Sam I Am"
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Date: 2/21/2012 8:37:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a terrific win for this excellent write on the transformation theme luv.. brilliant one..
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2012 7:47:00 AM
nice put down Carrie.
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:49:00 PM
Very nice, Carrie. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:46:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/31/2012 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in Susan's "Little Viewed Jewels" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations well done Carrie x
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Date: 1/31/2012 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Carrie, love Elizabeth
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Date: 1/31/2012 9:38:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win, you don't need any of them..David
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Date: 1/31/2012 9:33:00 AM
A little aftershave and I'm good to go. But I really enjoyed reading about what you go through. Great write Carrie
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