Cover Girl

Splashed in lilac scent and robe of satin
She contemplates her choice of dresses
In her hand a string of pearls
In her trance, a cover girl-

A curling iron upon her tresses
Pale as a mushroom
In her room
A counter spread, from where she grooms
Her closet filled with many choices
Her cupboard filled with many faces-
Eleven selves on seven shelves

A jar of this, a tube of that
To smooth a line, or cover time
A puff of magic on her skin
Erase, define, her artist’s brush
Will shape a line, or paint a blush-

A peach to ripen on her cheek
A berry, picked, to add mystique
A bit of blue upon the lid
A sparkle brown extends the lash
She twists her mouth…a dash of shine
A shadow, cream, a paste, a gloss…. 
A drawer of rainbows from the shop

A Cover Girl lies in jar
Yet, what has mattered most of all
is all the beauty in her heart





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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Maverick Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 6:53 AM
many good wishes on your placement in the Tanka contest here Susan..'
A  Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 5:53 PM
A very good poem Carrie, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
Nance Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 7:32 AM
Grats on your win. Awesome poem you presented here, good job
Torres Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 2:33 PM
impressive.beautiful.awesome.^_^ this is one superb write for a woman in the world of fashion, a cover girl!! ..well stated life, a hardest one indeed... COngratulations, Carrie!!! ^__^
Lamoureux Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 8:33 AM
I am impressed Carrie, congratulations.
Green Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 2:03 AM
I really like this approach you took. Nice work here, my friend. Congrats on your win!
Johnson Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 12:32 AM
Great entry Carrie. I really like this one. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Deschler Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 11:56 PM
I loved the rhyming and the smooth word flow. I also liked how you ended this poem with a question. Yes, our inner beauty is much more important than our outer beauty! A wonderful poem, Carrie! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Guzzi Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 6:12 PM
Wow perceptive fav line [ Eleven selves on seven shelves] Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
Bauer Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 2:42 PM
ah, that is the question, indeed! great poem, carrie! congrats on your win!
Hamilton Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 10:08 AM
delightful glimpse behind the scenes congrats Shadow x smiles
Onclaud Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 10:05 PM
so thought-provokong and as always, well scribed, carrie... miles of congrats to you for a high win!..:) huggs
Gauttam Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 12:14 PM
Amazing use of words and strangling act of the thoughts... that is just awesome.... fabulous poem ..Carrie .. keep it up.. :)
A   Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 9:29 AM
Carrie, wonderful in every way... :-) . Congratulations! thank you for making my day a nice one... When you have time enjoy my beautiful blog * Called "Title That Reminds Me Of You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15763&PoetID=18720 ---always & forever *LINDA
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 10:13 PM
Carrie, You win too many contest, I am running out of adjectives for you, oh well, my problem. Seriously, this is a very good write. Congrats on making Debbie's winners' list................S.Ronthorpe - "Sam I Am"
Sweetheart Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:37 PM
congrats Carrie on a terrific win for this excellent write on the transformation theme luv.. brilliant one..
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Prabhu Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 7:47 AM
nice put down Carrie.
Merryman Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 2:49 PM
Very nice, Carrie. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Taylor Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 2:46 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in Susan's "Little Viewed Jewels" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations well done Carrie x
Scholtz Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Carrie, love Elizabeth
Williams Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 9:38 AM
Carrie congrats on your win, you don't need any of them..David
Quigley Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 9:33 AM
A little aftershave and I'm good to go. But I really enjoyed reading about what you go through. Great write Carrie
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