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Before life refunded my dreams My feet hurt, Grandma pressed her beads Full moon, spoke with light, let long hair speak Love together, spins forever, beautiful verse Twined all people, without applause For eternity For Eternity 11/09/11

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Date: 6/6/2012 6:39:00 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Jimbo. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2011 8:55:00 PM
Very nice.............is your blog a trick to get a bigger fan base!!??lol
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Date: 11/13/2011 9:03:00 AM
A beautiful piece Jimbo, love how you ended it as well ;) hope your weekend's been a great one thus far :)
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Date: 11/10/2011 9:40:00 AM
Love your descriptions of the full moon's beams seen as "long hair." Hold that love in your beauiful heart and be sure to share it with others, Jimbo. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/9/2011 8:11:00 PM
What a great line to start the verse with James, imaginative for sure and a great beginning for the rest of the fascinating story!
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Date: 11/9/2011 7:10:00 PM
* “I Like That Signature Ending of Yours * My Dear Precious James * Your Gifted Brush Has A Certain Wonderful Quality Towards Rich Depthful Colours Upon Your Lovely Canvas' * Family Is Love & Love Is Family * Amid The Ideal Light of Truth * Very Nice * Luv Always * Sarah.” *
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