Country Living

I took my life into my hands and shook her.
Is this living? I asked.
She grinned.

We are already in the country, which was my dream
Once upon a time. But is it still?
I questioned this until the birds began to sing.
Then I knew.
This is absolute living.

A red fox sauntered by, way down the hill.
His fluffy tail making him appear jaunty and fun.
I laughed when he heard my laugh and raced away.
Squirrels came down and began chasing each other
Up and down the tree, around the tree.
One of them was dancing on the tiny red ledge of the bird feeder.

If this isn’t living, what would be? I asked the cat.
She yawned and rolled over, letting the sun tickle her tummy.
The dog ran off barking hysterically, angry because he had seen the deer.
The deer bounded off, one black tail, another white.

The flowers smiled at me from my garden.
Red roses, hot pink tulips, lavender lilacs.
My husband came out to the porch.
Is this living or what? He asked me.
He was wearing his underwear.
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Deschler Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 8:35 PM
Those city folks don't know just what they are missing! I am also a country girl through and through, and yes the countryside is an ideal place to reside. I feel so lucky to have a home in such a rural area... I enjoyed everything about this poem Caren. The lovely imagery and a touch of humor made it so wonderful! Nicely done my friend!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Thank you Kelly. I am so country, it is crazy. I cannot imagine living in town ever again!
Bauer Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 7:08 PM
although i am a city girl through and through, i love this poem, caren! your love for country living really shines through and of course, i adore your sense of humor in the way you've ended this...
Krutsinger Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 4:53 AM
Thank you Ilene. The first time he did this I was horrified. Now it is not uncommon for Amazon drivers to catch him in his skivvies.
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