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Counting My Blessings

On this magical night of mystical beauty the enormous moon is my friend; As I gaze at the colors of lack in the night I deepen my stride and walk with the light each pebble asleep rolls away at my feet as the water subdues I'm in silent retreat ; in this magical moment of Mystical Beauty soaked to the skin when the day is off duty I count every blessing like grains of the sand gathered as one, in the palm of His hand; On this one blessed night, all the stars shine so bright, and Oh... , What a view !

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Date: 8/16/2019 11:31:00 AM
great rhythm and rhyme :) I love the 3rd line, great job and thanks for sharing! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/15/2019 1:01:00 PM
Cool flow
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Date: 8/5/2019 7:40:00 AM
To count all your blessings you will need to become a mathematician. I enjoyed this positive piece. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/2/2019 3:28:00 PM
'What a view' indeed my friend. Lovely piece of writing. Have a great day.
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Date: 8/2/2019 10:27:00 AM
So beautiful! A fave, dear Pixie!
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Date: 8/1/2019 7:42:00 AM
Wow delightful, Pixie.
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Date: 8/1/2019 6:55:00 AM
Lovely! Made me smile. :) Thank you! xomo
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