Counting My Blessings

On this magical night of mystical beauty 
the enormous moon is my friend;
As I gaze at the colors of lack in the night 
I deepen my stride and walk with the light 
each pebble asleep rolls away at my feet 
as the water subdues I'm in silent retreat ;
in this magical moment of Mystical Beauty 
soaked to the skin when the day is off duty 
I count every blessing like grains of the sand 
gathered as one, in the palm of His hand; 
On this one blessed night, 
all the stars shine so bright,  
and Oh... ,
What a view !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Scars Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 11:31 AM
great rhythm and rhyme :) I love the 3rd line, great job and thanks for sharing! :)-luloo
Quigley Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Cool flow
Lamoureux Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 7:40 AM
To count all your blessings you will need to become a mathematician. I enjoyed this positive piece. Hugs Rick.
Mchattie Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 3:28 PM
'What a view' indeed my friend. Lovely piece of writing. Have a great day.
Gauthier Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Wow delightful, Pixie.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 6:55 AM
Lovely! Made me smile. :) Thank you! xomo
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