Counting Deer

There are five perhaps six, maybe more? There's always the invisible when observing deer. A speckled group braids a tangled grove. Stippled light shapes, not their appearance but their disappearance. Deeper in the trees there are mottles and flecks, a sun-streaked shimmering. Deer thread leaf and bough, floating over pools of light and shade. I watch tallying their invisible sum on a green abacus.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ferdous Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 10:25 PM
Liked the description, loved the silence in between!
Ashford Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 10:30 PM
Thank you Tamanna. Yes, sometimes the silence speaks loudest.
Delaney Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Hi Eric: Beautiful thoughts on nature’s camouflage. How have you been, friend? SuZ
Ashford Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Hi SuZ, thanks for the comment, and the inquiry. Yes, I am doing great - still breathing!
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