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Counting Deer

There are five perhaps six, maybe more? There's always the invisible when observing deer. A speckled group braids a tangled grove. Stippled light shapes, not their appearance but their disappearance. Deeper in the trees there are mottles and flecks, a sun-streaked shimmering. Deer thread leaf and bough, floating over pools of light and shade. I watch tallying their invisible sum on a green abacus.

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Date: 9/30/2019 10:25:00 PM
Liked the description, loved the silence in between!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 9/30/2019 10:30:00 PM
Thank you Tamanna. Yes, sometimes the silence speaks loudest.
Date: 9/30/2019 12:29:00 PM
Hi Eric: Beautiful thoughts on nature’s camouflage. How have you been, friend? SuZ
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Eric Ashford
Date: 9/30/2019 12:44:00 PM
Hi SuZ, thanks for the comment, and the inquiry. Yes, I am doing great - still breathing!

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