Count First -- Three Lines Ae Fine Contest

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There is an old Russian saying "Measure seven times and then cut", which was my inspiration for the poem.  Consider again and again, and then act.
Count First

So you're too cool to finish up high school.
consider that no one will hire a fool.
Count first.

You might be fine with selling fries and burgers.
Take some classes, sell some bigger orders.
Count first.

Before you cut along the penciled line,
Get out your ruler, measure one more time--
Count first.

Before you cook your specialty times three
Make an ingredients inventory.
Count first.

You won't impress that pretty girl so fine
If you can't pay the bill for wine and dine.
Count first.

Before you finally pop the question,
Give her an honest evaluation.
Count first.

If you want a newly-wed apartment,
Think smaller--there is a big down payment.
Count first.

You covet a car with high performance.
Can you even afford car insurance?
Count first

Before buying a new high-tech gadget,
Is there enough in the household budget?
Count first.

When maneuvers are in the planning stage,
Before you commit to a shell barrage.
Count first.

Before overdoing your Santa Clause,
Can you pay the rent?  Read the fine print clause..
Count first.

Before you walk up to the Pearly Gates,
What's on your conscience--ask before too late.
Count first.



Mark Halliday 17 May 2014
Dixdeux O

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/8/2014 8:02:00 PM
Congratulations....Linda
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Date: 6/8/2014 7:59:00 AM
MARK,, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/2/2014 8:10:00 AM
A truly fine write my friend. One that counts!! Congrats on the win!!!!!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/2/2014 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Mr. Lindley.
Date: 6/2/2014 6:41:00 AM
great pen Mark congrats on win hugs
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/2/2014 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Ms. Hamilton. Is Shadow your actual first name; if so, that's so cool. I know a woman here whose first name is Mystery.
Date: 6/2/2014 4:09:00 AM
huwow! this on greatgreat write.. full of lessons and more.. :) CONGRATULATIONS MARK!
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Date: 6/2/2014 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Ms Guillermo. I liked your piece too, though it was a sad topic.
Date: 6/1/2014 1:29:00 PM
Awesome..just so clever...congrats.. Soup Mail! BG
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/2/2014 9:26:00 AM
Thanks. They were inspired by an old Russian saying "Measure seven times, and then cut".
Date: 6/1/2014 11:57:00 AM
You have made wonderful use of the form. These short forms are perfect as you have shown for strings! ;) Congrad's Light & Love
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/2/2014 9:28:00 AM
Thanks. You're right, they do string well together if you have a common theme.
Date: 6/1/2014 11:20:00 AM
Mark it's such a tremendous write !! Great work done,, congrats on merited win !
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Date: 6/2/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Sharma. When I get a break from work I'll look at some of your work. In what field are you a doctor in?
Date: 6/1/2014 1:44:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, Mark
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/2/2014 9:33:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Mehta. I've remarked that you usually rank in the top works--deservedly. Thanks for your frequent comments.
Date: 5/31/2014 11:23:00 PM
WEll, this is a lot of three liners, but they come together to make one great message poem!! Congrats on a fine win.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/1/2014 12:34:00 AM
Thanks Ms. D.
Date: 5/31/2014 8:34:00 PM
I don't think you missed a point. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/1/2014 12:37:00 AM
Thanks Ms. J.
Date: 5/17/2014 6:53:00 PM
amazing write Mark. :) Great job, and good luck!
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Date: 5/17/2014 11:33:00 PM
Thanks on both.
Date: 5/17/2014 4:53:00 PM
excellent poem and a salutary lesson for some I'm afraid. good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 5/17/2014 11:33:00 PM
Thanks for commenting.
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