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Could He Cling

to a narrow plank his fingers clung hurled overboard by a storm that wrung the life from his companions would he slip or could he cling to this fragile thing ‘tween him and the unforeseen

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Date: 4/8/2024 11:21:00 AM
precarious…still will he be rescued from the unforeseen… Some great reading from you today!!
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Date: 4/7/2024 6:09:00 PM
Also, can he swim. I enjoyed this rhyme.
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Date: 4/7/2024 10:48:00 AM
So many of our lives vicarious and fragile, at times hanging on by the skin of our teeth. Resonates, Robert
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Date: 4/7/2024 9:31:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. Hang On... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 4/7/2024 3:13:00 AM
God and you are a majority...hang in there, claw in there. Blessings my friend.
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