Couch Potato

Just a small piece of time 
For a little peace of mind. 
I’m piecing it all together 
While I sit comatose 
Viewing the News in disbelief. 
Disgusted, I divert my attention 
To the puzzle of Leonardo de Vinci’s Last Supper. 
And I mumble to myself, 
“Jesus, what in the world is going on?"
I reach for a piece with a couple of eyes.
Hoping they are Yours. 
But they’re not . . .  
They’re Judas's. 
Figures. 
Apparently, You’re not returning 
When things get bad. 
With two World Wars in our past, 
I suppose, things have to get really bad 
To rapture Your attention. 
Or perhaps, 
We could surprise You. 
I’d be willing to bet 
You’d be rather pleasantly surprised 
With Peace on Earth, 
With no one starving, 
With no one needing to beg, 
With no one gasping for air due to smog, 
With no one swimming in trash, 
With no one stepping in a bag of poo, 
With no one hesitating to howl at the moon, 
With no one hiding the last piece 
Of the puzzle under the couch, 
With no one being that guy. 
So, maybe You’d rather return 
When things are good. 
All lessons learned. 
When life is wonderful. 
Everyone being at peace with each other. 
Everyone taking the time 
To be a piece of the solution. 

And not lost in the crotch of the couch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Crandall Avatar
September 1, 2024 at 11:48 AM
It sure is overwhelming to read the news Benjamin. It seems while you're stationary on a couch, your brain is still working well and actively.
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 2:30 AM
your style is unique, thought provoking but some lines sure do make me smile:-) There is an Art to writing poetry like this - write on! hugs jan xx
Junaid Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 12:04 PM
this is such a gobsmacking slap to the face to almost everyone nowadays. we're so obsessed with gossiping on everything that breathes via social media but few actually try to use the voices we have all been given for good. you see people, literal children dying of starvation, war happening on television like what's going on in Palestine, for example and the world does nothing about it. few people raise their voices and they have my respect for sure. thank you for being one of these people.
Beaufort Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 8:27 AM
Benjamin, the way you intertwine important concepts within the task of assembling a jig-saw puzzle comes together very well. I am quite impressed and am smiling after reading. Wouldn't it be wonderful indeed if peace and all the other things you mention came to be! Perhaps it will come!!
M  Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 1:58 PM
An intriguing and interesting write Benjamin...really enjoyed! Debx
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 7:07 PM
Positively inspiring, Benjamin! Thanks, Gershon
Rose  Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 6:16 PM
I wish we could go back into time, when we cared for one another and spoke to each other more connectedly, thank you for this reminder dear poet
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