Cotton Candy Skies Senryu

……COTTON CANDY SKIES…… pink, strawberry ones reflecting sunlight are the best reaching one……hardest 9/22/2022 ~3~

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/27/2022 7:47:00 PM

Love the thought... even the frustration. Sharp senryu, my friend. ~ Head in the Clouds, Feet on the Ground

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/28/2022 3:02:00 PM

More like….mouth in the clouds, feet on the earth! I, too thought it was a unique senryu. Quite not the run of the mill ones! Thank you, Gershon Panagiota xx

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/24/2022 4:42:00 AM

Reminds me of Coney Island when a kid. When entertainment was entertainment. And I was yet I. Love it!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/24/2022 3:49:00 PM

Wow Prince! I loved Coney Island. I was so amazed, they had Salt Water Taffy. We had none in the Midwest. Mom bought me my first two piece bathing suit…like a metallic pink. I don’t recall rainbows there. But he loved the Atlantic Ocean, Huds, Pangie xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/23/2022 1:33:00 PM

- I can see them... beautiful to look at, Pangie :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/23/2022 2:17:00 PM

Greetings Anne -Lise! Nothing like pink clouds… ….if only we could Taste their spun sugar, eh? You, too, have a lovely, colorful ..autumn weekend, Peace, Pangie xx

Michael Tor

Date: 9/23/2022 12:43:00 PM

Clever Pangie I saw what you wrote and I loved it. Be blessed.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/23/2022 1:14:00 PM

Both you and Elena are extremely bright! That is why you liked this Senryu. It looks simple but the third line, is the real catcher. You and Elena are “ reachers”…so, am I. Thank you, Pangie with hugs xx

Elena Eagle

Date: 9/23/2022 6:16:00 AM

Cotton candy is a wonderful mystery to enjoy. I really liked this poem.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/23/2022 10:11:00 AM

I am so glad you liked this, Elena. It takes thought to understand it…..apparently, you got the point! I am grateful. Hugs, Pangie xx