Cotton Balls

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This isn't what I saw earlier on the walk, but similar to it, now.

Clouds Today Look like cotton balls Floating in the sky As if someone spilled them Spread on a blanket of blue In spaces, sun is shining through With light and warmth on my pleasant walk Across the land, with cotton balls above Heidi Sands 8/14/17

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John Michaels

Date: 8/18/2017 11:10:00 AM

Nice comparison, Heidi. Unfortunately the picture wasn't showing for me, but the poem conjured up a lovely image! All the best, John.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2017 12:56:00 PM

Hi John. Thanks so much. I don't know why the photos don't stay lately, when I upload my own. I appreciate your comment on this :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/15/2017 8:33:00 AM

A poem on Cotton Balls, I couldn't resist. I'm glad, for I have been treated to a lovely stroll amongst the clouds. Beautiful.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 8:46:00 AM

lol. That's funny Scott. Thank you for your visit to this one and taking the time to comment on it :) I am happy you enjoyed it. Have a nice day!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/15/2017 4:58:00 AM

This is a beautiful write my friend! I really enjoy reading your poetry everyday, it is so uplifting to read and ingest! What a brilliant poem, such a gorgeous thing to see, cotton ball clouds are fun and awesome! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 7:25:00 AM

Hi Russell. I am happy you enjoy reading the poetry. That makes me happy. I always appreciate your enthusiastic, kind comments. I don't know if the photo is showing, but there was a photo I put in that was similar to this later in the day. Thank you

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/14/2017 5:15:00 PM

What a pleasant walk it was!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 5:27:00 PM

It really was Vijay! and the clouds were all separated in small cotton like balls across the sky. Very nice, thank you :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/14/2017 3:45:00 PM

Clouds do look like cotton balls in the sky...on a sunny day. A Very sweet poem...Have a nice day

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 3:48:00 PM

There were a whole bunch of small ones today, that looked just like many of them! Thank you Arturo :) I hope you have a nice day too.