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Cosmic Memories

Dark wisps of silk billow as twilight drops Delicate the mystery of time stops Starry memories teasing the divine In the wet sand drawing sweet line that's mine Savoring moments of infinite grace Inspiring dreamy warmth of your embrace Longing for your strong velvety caress The breeze toys with the ruffles of my dress The moon rising in the blue of your eyes Whispers responses to my midnight sighs The stars come out at night to see your smile As if separated by cosmic mile I’ll adore you still with my every breath Nothing would e'er stop that even in death AP: 1st place 2023 Submitted on May 16, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S CHOICE F sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD Originally posted on March 29, 2019

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Date: 3/30/2019 9:40:00 AM
I remember this feeling well, "The breeze toys with the ruffles of my dress" - it was an innocent, wonderful, God-like feeling. This poem does also, Line.
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Date: 3/30/2019 9:58:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/30/2019 3:09:00 AM
I love it when a poem brings you somewhere else.... beautiful
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Date: 3/30/2019 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Frankii, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 3/29/2019 11:38:00 PM
This is beautiful, Line. So romantic....
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Date: 3/29/2019 11:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carole, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

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