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heaven is earth ~ only knowledge can save Eden ***

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/25/2019 5:28:00 PM

Very profound, deeply honest and truthful.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/26/2019 7:09:00 AM

Thank you :) I was not sure, thought I might offend some with my liberal interpretation of biblical reference. ;) xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/21/2019 4:21:00 PM

We must save her, to save ourselves!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/22/2019 6:28:00 AM

Yeah, saving her, is saving ourselves x

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 6/20/2019 6:31:00 PM

less we continue to destroy

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/20/2019 9:40:00 PM

:( xo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 6/20/2019 10:27:00 AM

Maureen don't bite the wrong apple, or pomegranate or whatever forbidden fruit you believe. And hey, where was Lilith all this time???

Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/20/2019 1:10:00 PM

Laughing out loud at your response. Yes a tomato is a fruit, and dear Lilith knew everything about temptation.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/20/2019 11:53:00 AM

Tomato! Before or after whispering in Eve's ear?

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/20/2019 9:50:00 AM

Deep..very deep, Panagiota

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/20/2019 11:53:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota :) xomo!