Cool Dude

Shoulders high he saunters in,
Confidence betrayed by his grin.
He shows them off, his high end gear,
Mirror-polished shoes, man of the year.
He owns the room, he sets the mood.
He knows this fact, he’s a cool dude.
Victory fingers to his lips,
 He takes on-lookers stares for keeps.
He shakes a hand, then he greets
Through the charred bones he calls his teeth.
Standing in line, he puffs his smoke
Without a care, ill-mannered bloke.
As he enjoys the devil’s leaves,
We too must take what free he gives.
His business done he leaves in songs,
Time bombs ticking in our lungs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Henshaw Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 2:00 PM
WOW! typical of an African society. I like your rhyme couplets 'tis very inspiring. Keep that up i enjoyed every line. Hugs>>>>>>>Henshaw<<<<<<<<<
Safindah Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 4:38 AM
Your comment warms my heart Henshaw. Thanks for stopping by.
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