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Cool Down - Turns the Heat Up

to escape the sun we frolic in the ocean igniting our fire

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/29/2010 11:15:00 AM

I am stopping in today to thank you for all your wonderful comments Wilma. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/19/2010 5:52:00 PM

Wilma, you need to stop this, girl! It's getting hot in here! lol But I love your Senryu!! Going to my fav. Love, Audrey

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/19/2010 7:02:00 AM

Truly hot Wilma, awesome. Harry

James Fraser

Date: 10/18/2010 9:03:00 AM

Blimey, I'm going to swoon again. Now where is this secret cove > another dreamy Senyru Wilma >> James ;)

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/18/2010 4:36:00 AM

sizzzling!great work!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/18/2010 1:26:00 AM

we certainly do Wilma, again a wonderfull thought provoking poem from you, just love them. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/17/2010 9:33:00 PM

My kinda write Wilma..luv the ocean.. luv the sun.. luv the fire .. its all good my friend.. an exquisite piece luv.. enjoyed tonight.. hard to cool down tonight..Ron just got home from being away five days....and nights...haha..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2010 8:28:00 PM

VErY INTERESTING and creative, Wilma!!

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/17/2010 8:05:00 PM

are you saying..like Jim Morrison,,come on baby light my fire?!!! loved it Wilma..take care~Deb

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/17/2010 3:30:00 PM

the fire ingniting with passion is much more pleasurable than out in the sun, Wilma

Kim Hilliker

Date: 10/17/2010 12:35:00 PM

A lot said in a few words.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/17/2010 10:41:00 AM

way to go for you for reading between lines-- ;) and eep I am still awake?? O_0

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/17/2010 10:39:00 AM

It's that fire within you're talking about, right? Great romantic poem, Wilma!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/17/2010 10:04:00 AM

A wonderful senryu, Wilma! wow very intense, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/17/2010 10:01:00 AM

sounds like fun, Wilma :) very cool irony here ;) haha hope I am making sense? hugs to you

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/17/2010 9:28:00 AM

Well, that's another thing we have in common, Wilma. People down in Florida frolic in the ocean all year long. Here in New Jersey, the swimming season is much shorter. Enjoyed your senryu, Wilma! Have a wonderful day. Love, Carolyn