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She smiles, they swarm around her, small beings with huge eyes in masked faces, ‘trick or treat’ their voices swell, fill her ears with singsong as she holds out the tray. Arms reach out, small hands clutch, dig deep, push against soft flesh, nails dig deep, cause blood to surface. She staggers, almost falls, calls out loud when fingers pinch, nip at worn out flesh, grasp tight as words that taunt fill the air, echo through the silent night, sweet cookies for everyone but cookies are not on the menu tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/8/2012 9:26:00 AM
Dear Gloria Had no idea where this was going. I wonder if candy apples are still okay. Welcome. Kathy
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Gloria Watts
Date: 4/9/2012 7:41:00 AM
Kathryn - I guess they might be, but then again you must take care, all cookies are in demand. Thanks for your comment. gloryia
Date: 4/8/2012 7:06:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Gloria, I like your poem alot. Hope you vill read, comments and write alot of poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Gloria Watts
Date: 4/9/2012 7:40:00 AM
Anne, thanks, happy that you enjoyed my poem. I hope to write more and get round to commenting on everyone's poetry. gloryia
Date: 4/7/2012 11:08:00 PM
Gloria, wow..lol.. yes... sometimes cookies,, need to be off the menu.... have yourself a wonderful and Happy Easter, good night~ PD
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Gloria Watts
Date: 4/8/2012 7:04:00 AM
Thanks, and a happy Easter break to you too.
Date: 4/7/2012 9:28:00 AM
What a surprise this poem is. Intense after a light start, and an interesting form.
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Date: 4/8/2012 7:06:00 AM
Happy that you enjoyed, it's a double etheree one of my favourite structures.

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