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Each day I find life gets more upsetting because too often I keep forgetting the names of loved ones I should remember. They shouldn't fade like a dying ember, so I talk to them instead of fretting. Sometimes I offer them a pot of tea to show I'm grateful for their company. "Would you like a scone?" I asked my friend, Kay. "Yes, Mary. You've outdone yourself today." Times passes quickly when she's here with me. I know they're all gone, my used-to-be friends. Doing all the talking has dividends... I never have to say, 'good night" or "bye." No tears as they're leaving to make me cry. You see, our conversation never ends. In the daylight, at the window I sit, passing time with yarn and needles, I knit. I pretend my old friends are with me here, letting me bend their interested ear. I'm not senile; but I have a keen wit.

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Date: 10/21/2023 10:33:00 AM
"dividends..." is a choice interpretation, Lin! Your poignant touches of fade brought into light by a clinging heart are well deserving for your 1st placement, my friend! Aloha, William
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Date: 10/21/2023 2:25:00 PM
Yes, it's great to back and accommodate those who beautifully transcend nature!
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Date: 10/21/2023 1:56:00 PM
It's so wonderful to have you back, William and thank you so very much for leaving me your kind words.
Date: 10/21/2023 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I enjoyed it.  Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..........
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Date: 10/21/2023 1:55:00 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you, Paula.
Date: 10/20/2023 10:49:00 PM
Lin, thank you for taking part in the contest and congratulations on your win. You set a heartfelt scene of ageing. God bless
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Date: 10/21/2023 1:55:00 PM
Thanks for the honor of a placement, Eve.
Date: 10/7/2023 4:41:00 AM
What a sad and evocative poem. I can so relate to your words, so artistically crafted. I've lost many a friend over the years. I, too, have silent conversations with them. In my mind's eye, we're young again. I think doing so helps me, for, like you say, I don't have to say 'goodbye.' A powerful and creative poem, Lin. Enjoy your day...and have some tea :-)
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Date: 10/21/2023 1:54:00 PM
Thanks very much, Sara. I'm sorry it took so long for me to see your fine comments. Tea sounds good right now.
Date: 10/6/2023 10:54:00 AM
Nice poem. Aging has all kind of problems I can easily forget my own name once a while.
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Date: 10/6/2023 11:18:00 AM
lol Jay. Just answer to "Hey you." Thanks for commenting, Jay.
Date: 10/6/2023 6:58:00 AM
Nice one, Lin. And I like the AABBA scheme.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/6/2023 7:09:00 AM
Thanks for clarifying, Andrew. ;-)
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Date: 10/6/2023 7:05:00 AM
Hi again, Lin. Yes, as it says, it's Andrew John. We have two surnames: Johns and John. Quite a few of the latter here in Wales, UK, though there are a fair few Johnses, too.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/6/2023 7:02:00 AM
Good morning. Is it Andrew John or John Andrew? Thanks for reading me and leaving your feedback. I appreciate you for that.
Date: 10/6/2023 4:48:00 AM
Somber and well written Lin. Thanks
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Date: 10/6/2023 5:24:00 AM
I'm always appreciative of your insightful thoughts, Jeff. Thank you.
Date: 10/5/2023 11:28:00 PM
ahhh the Autumn of our life where the leaves begin to fall, the blooms now are the potpourri....the phone rings, the message is the unexpected expected....lovely writing, loved it line by line
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Date: 10/6/2023 5:23:00 AM
"Blooms now are the potpourri..." That's an appropriate poetic phrase for this lonely lady's existence. Thanks so much for gracious comments and compliments, Timothy.
Date: 10/5/2023 4:56:00 PM
Hi Lin, Nice to meet you. I enjoyed reading your beautifully heartfelt poem this evening. Cheers Anne :-)
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Date: 10/5/2023 5:37:00 PM
Hello, Anne and it’s very nice to meet you. Thanks for visiting and leaving your kind thoughts.
Date: 10/5/2023 4:53:00 PM
I think if a friend dies or moves away, you’re still friends. If you remember them fondly, then even more so. I mean, if your mum or dad dies, they’re still your mum or dad… and a long gone friend is still a friend. So, you pour your friends a gin, Lin…. But if they don’t drink it… can I have it? Seriously though… a moving poem, well written. Terry
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Date: 10/5/2023 5:35:00 PM
All you’ve written is true, Terry. We can share a bottle and talk of old friends. Thank you very much.
Date: 10/5/2023 2:55:00 PM
Very beautiful poem Lin.
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Date: 10/5/2023 4:17:00 PM
Merci… Merci.
Date: 10/5/2023 2:53:00 PM
This is a great piece of writing about a very powerful emotion. Great job.
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Date: 10/5/2023 4:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, Michael.
Date: 10/5/2023 2:25:00 PM
Aloha Lin, You must be THE Lin Lane who once graced Connie's poetry club.I remember you fondly. I have been away from poetry for many months, and it is an immense treat to re-enter by reading your wonderful verse. A page of your poems came to my email, and I was captivated. Thank you for sharing your talent, and thank you for posting the poem in honor of Connie. She was my coworker and dear friend. Perhaps now my muse will reappear. Warmest aloha nui loa. Molly
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/5/2023 2:34:00 PM
Molly! I am the same Lin who loved being part of Connie's group. I recall you with much love. I saw my poetry had been floating around, thanks to a very generous friend who gifted me with a lifetime membership. Thank you for such gracious comments, Molly. Connie was a role model, not just as a poet, to so many of us. I'm sure you miss as dearly as I do, and others here. I'm thrilled to see you and look forward to reading you.
Date: 10/5/2023 10:40:00 AM
A wonderful yet sad write. Tea/friends go together. It is hard when they go but guess that is part of life. I have been off the computer for 3 weeks. Have a blessed day....................
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/5/2023 11:16:00 AM
Thanks for commenting, Paul. I'm sorry you were ill and wish for you... better health.
Date: 10/5/2023 9:46:00 AM
Such a sad moving poem….just beautiful Lin! Debx
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Date: 10/5/2023 10:06:00 AM
Hi Deb. When I looked at the painting, I thought... she's not fragile. Takes care of her plants and knits. She's just lonely, so I gave her some old friends to keep her company. Thanks, Deb.
Date: 10/5/2023 8:58:00 AM
Aww :'(
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/5/2023 9:15:00 AM
I felt sad for her, too, Dilly. This is where my thoughts took me, so...

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