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Conversation At the Station

A stretch at the train station before leaving France, listening to languages I don’t understand, catching a word or two, I sit in silence and people watch as you catch my eye bringing mother in from the rain, searching for a spot to leave her securely as security postures you to be on your way, yet mother is old, skin paper thin, so she can stay, and you leave her with me as we speak through the eyes and a nod of our heads, then she wanders away and I watch from my seat as she hangs damp clothes on rails, then can’t find her way to where she left her bag near her seat, so I go get her. And she wants to thank me. Wants to thank me with food. And I can’t refuse. A simple sweet roll Shared by one who has little Was I fed by God? Maggie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/15/2015 6:31:00 PM
MAGGIE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:00:00 AM
I had to read this again to fully absorb the beauty of your lines. Your words are smooth and mental friendly. My innerself jerk to your written expressions and I just cannot stop loving this beautiful page. Definitely a 7
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Maggie Gochee
Date: 4/15/2015 4:19:00 AM
And I, in turn, have read your beautiful comment several times. Thank you, Funom... Maggie
Date: 4/11/2015 9:57:00 PM
Maggie, thank you for the reply.. LINDA
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Date: 4/10/2015 8:31:00 PM
Maggie,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Maggie Gochee
Date: 4/11/2015 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Linda, for your kind note. I really don't consider myself a poet, I'm a painter who began writing lines to accompany my work. I love to write and am delighted to have discovered poetrysoup, I'm learning a lot. Your comment "when you are ready" has left me wondering what steps do I take to be ready besides writing and posting? Cheers, Maggie

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