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Consumed By Shadows

Are we truly masters of our own destiny Or are we lost, left slipping on the edge of fate Bloody and bruised knuckles just trying for dear life to hang on Constantly we deny our own existence Letting the past consume us, as we dwell on hate Love all but gone from this world Misery left in its wake Foiled, manipulated and confused Mindless fools left paused as life carries on A puppet draped with tangled strings Doing what's expected not what we want So many dreams left splintered as fragments of life pass us by Forever clouded, lost in the smoke from bridges we have burnt Do we turn a blind eye as the world screams for help Muffled by societies pillow Do we turn away..ignorant and wait till its left laying limp Lifeless on the floor Our world no more..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/17/2012 9:17:00 AM
exactly how i feel love this one favorite lines "misery left in its wake" "lifeless on the floor our world no more 7stars
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Date: 9/26/2012 11:02:00 AM
GREAT INTROSPECTION I CAN RELATE SO MUCH TO THIS AS FAR AS DESTINY CONCERD I THINK SOMETIMES THE PATH WE LEAD IS NOT ALWAYS CLEAR NICE WRITE XX DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 9/13/2012 3:09:00 PM
Somewhere down the line life returns to normal but inbetween the hurt shuffle relentlessly and leaves us the pain. Gave me lots to think about Tracie. We have our dark times I think.
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Date: 9/11/2012 6:23:00 PM
Tracey {Are we... not OUR we} & {are we lost} you could add 2nd to the last line [or take standbefore] [Our world is no more] and it would be good for the Stand contest ;) Light & LoveLight & Love
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Tracy Edwards
Date: 9/12/2012 7:40:00 AM
Cheers Deb.. The joys of writing at 2am.. xxx Tracie
Date: 9/11/2012 9:09:00 AM
i love this 6 stars +eed you to fav poets +poem cheack out my writing ithink we have a lot in commen
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:17:00 AM
Nice flow, keep penning. Love, Khalid
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Date: 9/5/2012 11:52:00 AM
i love this and the message you send. So powerful full of emotion..xx cory
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Date: 9/5/2012 9:24:00 AM
Love your verse! Cindy
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Date: 9/5/2012 8:30:00 AM
These powerful words have just sunk into me and let me tell you it's a truly amazing feeling, what a trip you took me on within this incredible write my friend! Wow Tracie, you really know how to write with emotion right on the edges of the page...so easy to grasp and feel! What a fabulous poem, grandiose piece, Great Work!!
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