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Constipation

Without any hesitation I must reach my destination I don't have an explanation No time for conversation I'll need all my concentration As I plan my evacuation With just a minor complication I'm in need of medication I'll need all my dedication To ignore this aggravation But out of desperation And hours of deprivation I come to the realization That it's only constipation

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James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2010 6:42:00 AM

Haha, good one Larry. It made me chuckle, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 5/28/2010 4:41:00 PM

Haaaaaaaaaa! You had a lot of fun with this contest, Larry, congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/28/2010 3:33:00 PM

Congratulatiolns on placing third with this cute poem. It was a challenge that you faced with determination. Love, Joyce

Date: 5/28/2010 12:37:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. I can relate to people coming into the ER like with their "desperation." Congratulations on placing third in Carolyn's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/28/2010 9:33:00 AM

Congrats Larry .. u have an amazing capacity for words and writing brilliant poetry ..a big win for u to enjoy for a well written Monorhyme .. still smiling .. enjoy your victory ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/28/2010 8:49:00 AM

Got a great laugh from this poem, Larry. Congratulations on placing third in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Karla Null

Date: 5/26/2010 9:53:00 PM

Funny, no wonder some people call it "the duty"..LOL......Karla

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 5/26/2010 5:50:00 PM

Great write! I got a chuckle out of this one. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Amy Green

Date: 5/26/2010 4:16:00 PM

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Larry! You are a trip! LOVE IT! I hope you are entering this in the contest... don't think you'll need any luck- this is great!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/26/2010 4:02:00 PM

I'll make this brief; It is my belief; EXLAX can end your grief; and you'll attain relief. You have my admiration; I know the sensation; when you reach that "special" location; you'll acchieve your salvation. I hope. Good luck. Great write, Larry. Have a good one. ...Ralph

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 5/26/2010 1:26:00 PM

this was a brilliant poem. very creative and most importantly very entertaining. i love poetry that captures my attention and yours did exactly that. job well done.

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 5/26/2010 1:02:00 PM

LOL, very amusing monorhyme. "I'll need all my concentration as I plan my evacuation" - brilliant line.