Constance

Having escaped from her attic on a bright summer day,
Constance skipped through the forest in fantasy play.

Flowers abloom; vibrant colors mix with green;
Constance found amazing beauty in everything.

A shy, maturing girl with only imaginary friends;
Flourishing happily in a world full of pretend.

In a pool of fresh water from a spring underground,
Constance knelt to take a sip and a beauty she found.

Where once was a little girl, a young woman she saw,
Whose beauty, adorned with flowers, left her in awe.

The reflection of her face in the rippling pool,
Smiled back with satisfaction in the water so cool.

Although unsure of herself in many different ways,
She saw confidence growing in the face that she gazed.

The water refreshed her when she finally took a drink,
But the reflection was more fulfilling for Constance, I think.


by, Joe Flach.  For Constance's "Reflection" contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 1:53 PM
Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Joe. Always, Annalise
Fraser Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations Joe on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 1:25 PM
HEy, what a great idea, using her name, and yes, she always talks about her attic! very nicely done. congatulations.
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on your win Joe in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
Muzzey Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 11:45 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 4:36 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 4:00 PM
How clever of you Joe. It is lovely and congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest.. so happy to be sharing the winners list with a great friend luv..
Freeman Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 7:37 AM
Joe, good to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's third place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
Maverick Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 10:42 PM
great to see you in the winning entrys joe.
Gorelick Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 9:15 PM
Now , why didnt I think of using that name? lol..great poem Joe with nice rhymes.. Im glad you scored so well..BG
Mannan Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 7:58 PM
A beautiful dedication to this beautiful lady. Many congratulations for this big win.
Poet Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:25 PM
Wonderful imagery!Congrats Joe on your big win !---kashinath
Onclaud Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:22 PM
a resplendent and powerful write… one big THUMBS UP to you, joe! :) hugggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Constance, Joe
Pettit Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 5:25 PM
"Constance", huh? Congratulations on your entry being chosen among the winners in the contest. Great set of rhyming couplets. Way to go, Joe!
Inka Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 10:13 PM
Way to notch a few brownie points Joe. hahahahaha. Just kiddin this is a great poem with great sentiment .
La France Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 7:26 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest. There is something about the title I really like!!
Falotico Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 1:35 PM
She will love this one Im sure...I did....Excellent write my friend
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