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As soon as the sun's eyes were opened. A little dory fee led me to the calm pond. I stopped in front of the mirror surface. I sank more deeply into the hazy stillness.
Written: October 15, 2021

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Date: 10/16/2021 3:13:00 PM
Beautiful couplets and picture Lasaad… Belle
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Date: 10/16/2021 2:21:00 PM
This is a lovely write.
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Date: 10/15/2021 10:10:00 PM
Beautiful couplets.
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