Conscience --- Diminished Hexaverse

heavy on the stairs
the sound of my thoughts-
my own voice resounds
and pounds on my door
of solitary

the dialogue 
within myself
never perjured 
is translucent

I profess
to launder
past regrets


if stains
can be 

cleansed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/28/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win....I feel diminished for not knowing this form before........George
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 5:11:00 PM
Dear Carrie, Many congrat's on your FIRST PLACE WIN, with this sensational Dimished Heaverse. Lainie
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:02:00 AM
A wonderful write! Congratulations on your win with this great Diminished Hexaverse. I ejoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 2/27/2011 9:29:00 AM
wow, what a very gripping & stirring piece, Carrie -- super congrats on your top win on this form :D hugs :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 6:26:00 AM
CONGRATS, Carrie! Peace always, John
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Date: 2/27/2011 6:06:00 AM
Cool Carrie! Congratulations to you
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Date: 2/27/2011 12:14:00 AM
Excellent message in this one, Carrie. Gad to see it on the winners's list. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:02:00 PM
Hi Carrie - Everything you write is unbelievably SUPERIOR. You excel in every poetic form. I admire you so much. Congrats on your #1 WIN in Mr. Heck's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:34:00 PM
yeyy, you made it to the top, carrie...remarkable down the line! my happy cheers to you for the fine win :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:15:00 PM
Awesome job , good to see you with a top spot, Carrie. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 2:21:00 PM
Very thoughtful write here Carrie!Congrats on your 1st place win in John's contest---kashinath
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Date: 2/26/2011 1:01:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in John's contest with this amazing as always creative write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:33:00 AM
Yes an amazing write, and a form that is new to me... Thanks for sharing my dear...luv Michael
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:35:00 PM
Ive never written one of these..Im going to have to think about it. I enjoyed yours very much..Ill bet you get your stains out. BG
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Date: 2/24/2011 10:42:00 AM
wonderful work...TAH
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