Connected

More than a handshake a passionate kiss and embrace, we are connected in ways even broader unseen – connected in our labors and dreams… in our joys and griefs in our compassion and blistering briefs~ how we petition our god our forgiveness and our sentences we share our prisons both the Jailer and thief

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/31/2023 2:09:00 PM

I believe we're all connected and in ways we cannot fathom. Your poem hits at this connectedness. We're all humans, connected by the prisons we keep in our mind as well as the passion we enjoy. Powerful.

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/31/2023 3:19:00 PM

I am a firm believer, that thoughts, feelings reach beyond the physical form, out into the realm of Universal Consciousness. For all we know, we are probably connected far into the Milky Way and even other galaxies. Blessings my friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/29/2023 9:05:00 PM

The last four lines kind of sum up life in the working world, don't they! Superior insight, Joe!!

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/30/2023 6:16:00 AM

We do it all to ourselves...a difficult concept to share with others and not be misunderstood. Is God in control? -- Yes! Do we do it to ourselves, all pain and suffering? -- Yes! The most misunderstood and abused concept, is that of Free Will. It does not simply mean we have the ability to choose...but also the ability to create all that we choose, from the ground we walk on, to the sky and all of its stars with myriads of wonder. Am I saying God did not create the world in 7 days? -- No, He did? I am saying I do not believe in the Bible, and that it was authored by God? -- No, I do believe profoundly in the bible, and that they are indeed the Pure Words of God!

Silent One

Date: 8/27/2023 3:23:00 AM

Interesting analogy and way to look at a relationship, so many will relate.. I really liked how you described it as a jailor and thief...

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/27/2023 6:14:00 AM

Hi Si; of course I realize that the jailer can go home in the evening or at least on weekends, while the prisoner must remain confined, behind bars. But what one experiences, never entirely leaves the mind, heart and soul. Very difficult to leave your work on the job. I've known good men, in law enforcement, whose wives and children had to also deal with the constant stress. I admire every man/woman who puts on a Selfless Uniform. Sacrifices for the greater good of humanity.

Valsa George

Date: 8/26/2023 5:19:00 AM

We occupy the same space and breathe the same air. We are connected in ways more than we all know and above all as Children of God. Wiith succinct words, you evolve new worlds, Joe.

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/26/2023 6:16:00 AM

Brilliant profound comment, Valsa -- Indeed, the same space and breathe -- Lung of The Almighty is our eternal, shared respiration. Love it!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/25/2023 6:30:00 AM

I love this I'm gonna write something to extend it with your permission Joe

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/25/2023 7:10:00 AM

Absolutely!! Make of this bud your beautiful blossom. Please do! Thank you my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2023 12:59:00 PM

so interesting and using the jailor and thief anology at the end. I really enjoyed this one.

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/24/2023 3:05:00 PM

Hi Andrea; still laughing from you last post. Thank was great! Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2023 12:31:00 PM

- Love is chemistry...true love is extremely strong and endures opposition and all kinds of trials...lovely written, Joe :) . hugs

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/24/2023 3:08:00 PM

Silly people don't weather storms together as well as they use to -- too many looking to cut-an-run at least difficulty. Wise comment. Thank you, Lise.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/24/2023 10:41:00 AM

United by our origins. Like it or not, were one great big family of man. Nice Joe

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/24/2023 11:27:00 AM

Thank you, Tom; like Martin and Lewis, Laurel and Hardy, Jekyll and Hyde:) We are a wild bunch!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/24/2023 9:46:00 AM

Connected in so many ways, it must be love. This is a beautiful poem Joe. A lovely read. Best wishes from SV

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/24/2023 9:54:00 AM

Love is our best connection without a doubt. Thank you, SV. Blessings.