Conjugal Visit

We finally arrived after going 
through metal detectors passing 
through so many children mothers 
praying for their sons then there 
was us my curiosity of it all passing 
the guards I felt strange this place 

a building shaped like a block of cheese 
I certainly didn't forget I wore wires 
pregnant buying weapons and drugs 
for the Fbi I felt like a rat the cheese 
building I guess this means i was a rat 
I didn't feel dirty like a rat not wearing 

a fox fur and isotonia gloves they finally
brought you out smiling with stacks 
of quarters in your pocket firnthe coke
machine just like the old days lake county 
music company quarters vending juke boxes
for a brief second I thought we at the shop

the coke machine in the federal prison was
actually one of your machine leased out 
throughout the prison systems all over 
the midwest my heart pounding again troubled 
even your smile was a crime your laughter 
completely a federal offense I was so naive 

ì felt sick when you gave me two napkins 
one with a bottle Coco Chanel the other 
one was a bottle poison the fragrance I had 
no idea I thought it was something horrible uzz
I gave your mom the poison her favorite keeping 

the Coco my favorite we held hands other 
visitors were kissing hugging I was just amazed
wondering what kind of life was this I really 
never understood what conjugal visits meant 
I was glad it ended though was it good for you 
I mean as it was me right now I craved a Chicago 
styled hotdogs an Italian beef sandwich and a nap
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Buhagiar Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 12:03 AM
A great description of a visit. Yet I lament your lack of punctuation, not to mention the division into stanzas. It would have been marvellous. Still your story fascinated me.
Nicholsen Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Thank you for you kindness I've been compared to e.e cummings and a few other poets who also left out the punctuation sometimes I'd go back and edit punctuation somehow it took the life right out of my work punctuation always meant the end even when I needed the reader to continue I became a bit fond of this absence of punctuation a strange way of writing I suppose defamiliarisation peculiar this piece was just words lingering I had to write them down thanks to you I was able to look over this piece again it truly was a rushed job thanks again many blessings you have a great day Victor.
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