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Congruence

My son, alas Looking on the technicolor page Saw but the picture of a king Shapes on a paper Imagination constructing him Missed the relevance That such a monarch long dead Lived only in our head And so with a boy's innocence Said one day I am going to be just like him It is ten yeras now My son and dreams are dust He knows now, I trust In the end it is all the same The final flicker of the flame And none is great, and none ashame In the teary muttering of a name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/13/2010 9:25:00 PM
You move me with each word in this emotional write. Your voice is so true, and even when I'm saddened by such a piece as this, I am somehow comforted by the honesty of it.
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:15:00 PM
Yes, David, this is the one ... to weep a son and in your weeping define the monarchy of death ... what a brilliant gift.
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:40:00 PM
Enjhoyed a very interesting write on you boy going to be a monarch, David
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