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She was once a bird That couldn't fly; a shy flower Wilting before she could bloom. Now she can fly, and did blossom. Oh, what a difference... A new attitude makes! Bitesize Poem No.57 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier Date written: 12/14/2022

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Date: 12/20/2022 4:37:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/20/2022 5:10:00 AM
Thank you very much, dear Sara:-)
Date: 12/15/2022 8:04:00 AM
Right attitude brings so much of positive changes in life. From a bud about to wilt, she has bloomed into a lovely flower! Beautifully stated, dear Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/15/2022 8:37:00 AM
Thank you very much, Valsa:-)
Date: 12/15/2022 6:03:00 AM
Small changes can pay big dividends in life. Uplifting write, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/15/2022 6:13:00 AM
So true, Vijay! I appreciate the compliment and visit, my friend.
Date: 12/14/2022 4:02:00 PM
Hello Edward, yes a new attitude makes a bif difference. Blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/19/2022 11:20:00 AM
Hello Edward, You are welcome Edward. Merry Christmas. blessing my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/14/2022 8:05:00 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely visit, Darlene:-)
Date: 12/14/2022 9:01:00 AM
Great one Edward :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/14/2022 10:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-)

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