Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

Look At Her Now

She was once a bird
   That couldn't fly; a shy flower
 Wilting before she could bloom.
Now she can fly, and did blossom.
           Oh, what a difference...
           A new attitude makes!


Bitesize Poem No.57 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier
Date written: 12/14/2022

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Sara Kendrick December 20, 2022 at 4:37 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Edward Ibeh December 20, 2022 at 5:10 AM Thank you very much, dear Sara:-)

Valsa George December 15, 2022 at 8:04 AM Right attitude brings so much of positive changes in life. From a bud about to wilt, she has bloomed into a lovely flower! Beautifully stated, dear Edward. Edward Ibeh December 15, 2022 at 8:37 AM Thank you very much, Valsa:-)

Vijay Pandit December 15, 2022 at 6:03 AM Small changes can pay big dividends in life. Uplifting write, Edward. Edward Ibeh December 15, 2022 at 6:13 AM So true, Vijay! I appreciate the compliment and visit, my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu December 14, 2022 at 4:02 PM Hello Edward, yes a new attitude makes a bif difference. Blessings my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu December 19, 2022 at 11:20 AM Hello Edward, You are welcome Edward. Merry Christmas. blessing my friend. Edward Ibeh December 14, 2022 at 8:05 PM Thank you very much for the lovely visit, Darlene:-)

Heidi Sands December 14, 2022 at 9:01 AM Great one Edward :) Edward Ibeh December 14, 2022 at 10:11 AM Thank you very much, Heidi:-)