Notes About The Poem

Confetti Sunset

Last eve's sunset wowed
for it held a million hues
as night stood waiting.
Reds and plums, hailed fading blues
Orange and pink spread the news.

I took a photo
of scarlet sun of my heart
in midst of tango.
A prelude to faint starlight-
in time's pretty pause.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Daniel Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 2:35 AM
Very colourful write, Evelyn, belated congratulations on POTW:)
Buehler Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Thank you so much for the happy thoughts, Jo. :)
Kitchin Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 4:25 AM
Evelyn, a belated congrats on POTW, a gorgeous poem, sorry I had the wrong comment previously!
Buehler Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words of congratulations, Tania. No apologies are necessary, as the error wasn't your fault, but a glitch in the system. Have a blessed new year!
Jones Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 3:51 PM
As per your usual standard this is outstanding. A fav. Congrats on potw now!
Buehler Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 5:02 PM
Your kind words are deeply appreciated Karen. Thank you also for the honor of your fav. Blessings and hugs.
Seeker Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 1:05 AM
“scarlet sun of my heart” ~ wow! Congratulations on POTW, Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 9:12 AM
Thank you very much. Merry Christmas.
Meadows Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 11:10 PM
It is nice to see the beautiful sunset. A lovely poem. Well done.
Buehler Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 5:16 PM
Thank you very much, Jeanette. :)
Jones Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 10:47 PM
Evelyn what a uniquely written and titled poem. I love the enchanting images and the harmonic tone. Congrats on being a featured poem!
Buehler Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 5:17 PM
I appreciate your kind thoughts very much, Karen. :)
Gorelick Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 5:06 PM
I would love to unfurl your exquisitely woven words and spread them out into a glorious tapestry of joy! Congratulations, Robert
Buehler Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 5:12 PM
What a lovely idea, Robert. Thank you so much for the happy thoughts. :D
Thomas Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 4:12 PM
Poetic artistry. A beautiful mental image you conjur Evelyn :)
Buehler Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 4:59 PM
I am pleased that you feel that way, FJ. Enjoy your evening. :)
Anaya Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 2:08 PM
I agree with Joe, you've made beautiful artwork with your precious words. Congratulations on your POTW, Evelyn Judy Buehler!! :D
Buehler Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 4:57 PM
Thank you for your treasured comment, Anaya. I hope your evening is wonderful, dear friend. :)
Skinner Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 7:44 PM
a lovely and enjoyable read Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 10:34 PM
Thank you very much, James. Merry Christmas!
Nicole Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 7:42 PM
I completely agree Evelyn, the sunset is just like confetti. Your words caress the page with beauty, elegance and grace. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Week. Happy Holidays ! :) Hugs, Brandy
Buehler Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 10:33 PM
Thank you for your warm appreciation, and kind compliments, Brandy. Merry Christmas! Hugs, Evelyn :)
La France Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Evelyn, lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, blessings
Buehler Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 11:29 AM
You have my heartfelt thanks for your kind words. Merry Christmas.
Lawless Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:59 AM
.."as night stood waiting", "in times pretty pause" As i read this those two lines jumped off the page to dance in my head. Great job Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 11:30 AM
Many thanks for your words of appreciation. Happy holidays.
Cunningham Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:43 AM
Nature sure produces some amazing colours Evelyn, congratulations to you on the honour of POTW. Tom
Buehler Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 11:32 AM
Thank you so much for your kind expressions. Merry Christmas.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. A beautiful write with beautiful colors. I love this colorful one. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Buehler Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 11:47 AM
Thank you so much for your warm words of congratulations, Paula. Merry Christmas.
Proxenos Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Hi Evelyn, two of your comments came to me instead of you under my POTW I will inform Poetry Soup. You should be getting those two comments which are from TANIA AND TOM. Great that you got POTD for it. hugs, Jennifer
Buehler Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 11:38 AM
Hi Jennifer, I'm sorry about the mixup. Thank you for informing me, and for your kind congratulations. Blessings.
Cunningham Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:46 AM
Hi Jennifer I've deleted mine to Evelyn off your POTW, mine to you on yours is still there. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 5:16 AM
an excellent write my friend Evelyn i wish you a very blessed and happy Christmas and give scores off congratulations for POTD. This little gem certainly deserved it. Enjoy the day. Hugs and blessings, JENNIFER
Buehler Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 11:43 AM
I know you meant to congratulate me on POTW, not POTD, and I appreciate your warm congratulations and well wishes very much. Have a blessed holiday season, Evelyn
Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 1:00 PM
- A beautiful sunset, Evelyn :) - Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 3:20 PM
You have my very deep thanks for the joy of your comment, Anne-Lise. A blessed Christmas to you and yours as well. hugs :)
Anaya Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 2:30 PM
Color makes the world go around. The title is perfectly selected. Amazing, I've seen many a poem of yours to me are classic ~POTD's! I will fave it too~Anaya
Buehler Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 4:05 PM
Your kind words are the delight of this evening, Anaya.Thank you so much for the joy they bring. Best of wishes, Evelyn ;)
DiMino Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Absolutely gorgeous writing! I would hang the art up on my wall as well -- love it! Fav!
Buehler Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 11:56 AM
What lovely thoughts, Joe! Thank you for them, and for the fave. :)
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