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Concrete Skin

Waking up like a statue, limbs that won't bend Isolating each, exhausting the energy I have to spend Like a rusted tin man, waiting to be oiled Or a piece of spaghetti, waiting to be boiled I feel like clay, needing to be kneaded I'm so damn tired, but I won't be defeated Working on each joint until I can stand From neck to toes, each finger fanned It's not too cold now, but my hands are still blue Drenched in sweat each dawn, like icy morning dew Time passed this way awhile, but I'm a lucky case Getting back to life at a fairly steady pace A pill to reverse my hardened concrete skin To stop the setting before it can begin A whole community of people with the same More common than I knew and I'd never heard the name Walking for the cause now that it's June Because I am able, in hopes others too, will be soon

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Date: 6/11/2022 10:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win. also for walking for the cause to help others. WE with rare conditions are the best to offer support. I am the support team leader for a rare heart and lung condition, called Pulmonary Arterial Hypertension. I take viagra 3 times a day. lol. Thanks for helping others.
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Date: 6/10/2022 5:48:00 PM
Hat, I'm so sorry about your condition. You have an unbeatable attitude; I hope you can be cured. Keep writing very good poetry!
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Date: 6/7/2022 10:57:00 AM
Hello, Hat. I admire your tenacity in not letting your illness get the better of you. Your skill at writing poetry is also to be commended. Nicely done, and I hope you will succeed in fighting off those symptoms.
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Date: 5/26/2022 10:09:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I liked that I was able to picture it in my mind. This poem was also very relateable, sometimes I too wake up likea statue unable to move
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Date: 5/19/2022 10:24:00 AM
Wow, I never heard of this malady before, Hat, so I appreciate your enlightening us. I thought of myasthenia gravis. I once served on a board combatting that ailment. I thought of severe arthritis, from which I suffer, but, in any case, my heart and my sympathies go out to you. Nice writing!
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Date: 5/19/2022 12:07:00 PM
Thanks Milton, all is good with me now, but I know some people struggle a lot w/ worse or unmanaged symptoms, same family as rheumatoid arthritis though so sympathies back at ya! Hope you are well, I appreciate the comment

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