Concrete Skin

Waking up like a statue, limbs that won't bend
Isolating each, exhausting the energy I have to spend
Like a rusted tin man, waiting to be oiled
Or a piece of spaghetti, waiting to be boiled
I feel like clay, needing to be kneaded
I'm so damn tired, but I won't be defeated
Working on each joint until I can stand
From neck to toes, each finger fanned
It's not too cold now, but my hands are still blue
Drenched in sweat each dawn, like icy morning dew
Time passed this way awhile, but I'm a lucky case
Getting back to life at a fairly steady pace
A pill to reverse my hardened concrete skin
To stop the setting before it can begin
A whole community of people with the same
More common than I knew and I'd never heard the name
Walking for the cause now that it's June
Because I am able, in hopes others too, will be soon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 10:03 PM
Congrats on your win. also for walking for the cause to help others. WE with rare conditions are the best to offer support. I am the support team leader for a rare heart and lung condition, called Pulmonary Arterial Hypertension. I take viagra 3 times a day. lol. Thanks for helping others.
Peck Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 5:48 PM
Hat, I'm so sorry about your condition. You have an unbeatable attitude; I hope you can be cured. Keep writing very good poetry!
Logan Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 10:57 AM
Hello, Hat. I admire your tenacity in not letting your illness get the better of you. Your skill at writing poetry is also to be commended. Nicely done, and I hope you will succeed in fighting off those symptoms.
Lucas Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 10:09 AM
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I liked that I was able to picture it in my mind. This poem was also very relateable, sometimes I too wake up likea statue unable to move
Hankins Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Wow, I never heard of this malady before, Hat, so I appreciate your enlightening us. I thought of myasthenia gravis. I once served on a board combatting that ailment. I thought of severe arthritis, from which I suffer, but, in any case, my heart and my sympathies go out to you. Nice writing!
Bueckert Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 12:07 PM
Thanks Milton, all is good with me now, but I know some people struggle a lot w/ worse or unmanaged symptoms, same family as rheumatoid arthritis though so sympathies back at ya! Hope you are well, I appreciate the comment
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